• Published 4th Sep 2022
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Best saviour ever - Demondog5



Sunset Shimmer finds a homeless girl and takes her in and does whatever she can to help her

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Making a promise

It has been 4 days since Sunset hang out with her friends, usually she would go out and take a walk, play her favourite game, even go to the library and look up the Daring Do books or even some astronomical books, but she couldn’t do any of that today cause she was on the street with Nyx by her side and taking her to see the Doctors.

While having Nyx at her home she notices that there were a few things odd about her.

First day

When Sunset was preparing breakfast, she was making healthy cereals for Nyx and the called out for her but there wasn’t a reply. So Sunset decided to go up to her room and see if she was up as she made her way up the stairs, when she got to the door she starts to slowly turns the nob and opens the door and enters.

When she was inside she saw Nyx was on the bed rubbing her eyes from sleep and then she turn her head towards to where Sunset is and winch at the sight of her. Then Sunset said to Nyx “Come on Nyx I’ve make some cereal for you come with me”. remembered why Sunset brought her here to her place, and so she got out of bed and was walking behind Sunset towards the kitchen.

They sat at the table in silence while they were eating breakfast Sunset was enjoying her cereal with lots of nutrition to be a healthy girl, but then she notices that Nyx wasn’t eating her breakfast she was wondering why she wasn’t touching it and so she decide to ask her what’s wrong. “Hey, Nyx why aren’t you eating your breakfast” ??. “I just never had something like this before, what is this stuff”?? Nyx response, “It’s a health cereal flavoured”, and so Nyx takes her spoon and dips it in the bowl grabbing what was in it, lifting it to her mouth and once it was in there she spits it all out while coughing and moving away.

Sunset saw this and was shaking her head at the scene, she then got up from her chair and walked towards Nyx and put her hand on her shoulder and said “Hey, it’s not that bad when you get to used to it” with a warm friendly smile, then she went towards Nyx bowl, picks it up and decides to have a taste and when she finishes she turns around to show that it’s delicious and was teasing her that if she doesn’t wants it that she will eat it all.

Nyx knows what she was doing and went up to her chair and starts to eat up all her cereal after that she was trying to hold it in, after waiting 10 minutes she went back up stairs to her room and close the door.

Second day

Sunset was in her room trying to find some old clothes to see what would be suitable for Nyx, after some looking over her clothes she finally fond a few that could fit her, so she laid them on the bed and called out for Nyx to come in her room after a while she came in and she looks nervous about something. “Um… you wanted me for something???”.

“Yes I did cause I wanted to give you some clothes to wear than what your wearing now” that was Sunset’s response to Nyx as she was looking down at her rag clothing bag feeling sad, but then she want over to Sunsets bed and looks at the clothes that were there alright she thought they might be ok, though she doesn’t know what to say.

After trying them on Sunset was surprise that they fit her and that she does haven’t to wear something old and raggy.

Day 3

While Sunset was coming downstairs to see where Nyx was hiding till she heard a noise coming from the living room and so she rushes to the source to see if something bad had happened, she was worried about Nyx. When she enters the living room, she wasn’t what she expected, she thought that someone broken in or something worse but it turns out that there was a book at the far end of the room from where Nyx was, and she had a sad face while be looking away and her arms cross while sitting.

Before Sunset went over to talk to Nyx she went over to the book and picks it up and on the cover was orange and yellow letters that said ‘Jungle Run’ it was about 3 teenagers who where trying to save the jungle from a curse’, Sunset got this book from a yard sale a while ago but then looks up at Nyx and then walks over to her to ask about but then she was cut off cause Nyx spoke.

“The letters and pictures aren’t being clear and I feel like they were doing it to be bad”

Sunset was surprise at that comment and was wondering what was wrong, then she had a theory and so she opens the book in front of her and to her surprise she was like forcing her eyes to read it but then she kicks it away and hump away to her room and slams the door.

Sunset was shock about what had just happen, the girl couldn’t read. She thought about calling a eye doctor about this, but she knows that she doesn’t have any paperwork for Nyx with her but hopefully she knows someone that can help her with this and with a set of clothes and so she wants to the phone and contact one of her friends.


Day 4


Sunset was walking down the street with the child, she was taking her to see a the eye doctor that her friend contacted and made a appointment for a free eye test, as a generosity token of friendship as they were walking along Nyx was looking scared at her new surroundings, Sunset notice this and was trying to comfort her like trying to hold her hand, Nyx notices and then looks around and held on to her hand.

After a while they arrive at their destination, then went in and as soon as they did a female employee walks up to them and ask in a calm friendly voice.

“Hello there do you have appointment or are you here for a free eye test”

“Well we are here for our 1 o’clock free eye test appointment” Sunset said to the female employee.

“Very well, I’ll ask you to wait at those chairs please”

As they went to the sitting area to be called for, after waiting like 5 minutes they went in the room they were looking all around the room the male doctor ask them.

“Who would like to go first” with a warm smile

Sunset looks at Nyx with a worry look and so she sigh and went up hoping to help her with her worries, after the appointment was done and the questions was answered the male doctor suggested to Nyx that she should get some glasses cause her vision is getting blurry and he writes a prescription for her and gives it to Sunset for safe keeping.

Sunset nodded and with that done they both went to the door and went towards to where Rarity boutique, Nyx doesn’t know about it and so they continue to walk and they didn’t say a word to each, soon enough they were in front of the boutique and went inside and saw a purple hair girl with a purple skirt with 3 diamonds on the side, she was humming in a happy tone sorting out one of her clothes rack.

When she heard the door opens with a ring of the door bell she turns around and saw Sunset walking in and smiles while towards her and says

“Sunset darling, how are you ?”

“Im fine Rarity thanks for asking, and thanks for helping me with the appointment, I didn’t know what to say over the phone “ she said with a little chuckle.

“You’re welcome darling it’s wonderful to extended my generosity to others so that they can be generous like me” with a hint of fashion dream to the stars. “So what are you here for, a new set of clothes or a chit chat since I don’t have many customers today”

“Well I do need a new set of cloths but it isn’t for me” with a nervous in her voice and she put her hands at her back and showed a new face to Rarity who had a shock expression at the girl in front of her and and Sunset spoke snapping her out of her froze state.

“Nyx meet Rarity, she is a good friend of mine who love doing favours for others, and Rarity this is Nyx who I fond and who was the one we heard on the news and I’m doing what I can to help her with her life and I promise to look after in my care cause I promise to her”.

Author's Note:

Sorry it took so long I’ve been busy a lot with getting fresh air, sorting out Christmas presents, getting ready for the new year coming, visiting family and reading some stories not to mention that our boiler got broken for a couple of days.

Well here’s to the new year coming and I’m going to get back to writing my stories well enjoy everyone 🤠

Comments ( 1 )

Good to see a new chapter!

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