• Member Since 15th Sep, 2012
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Interesting so far....looks good! No major errors at ll. Good story so far so do carry on! :)

>Tardis of Dr Whooves
Might continue at some point. However, please share with friends :twilightsmile:, I'd like to hear more feedback!

Quick question...will there be sequal?:fluttercry::fluttercry:

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Actually, there very well might be, please watch and wait, a surprise is in store. However, I wish not to spoil, but this next piece involves discord wreaking havoc and turmoil.

"Twists and turns are my master plan, then you go to where you began."

Spelling is horrible. There's something called spell check, use it. Sentences are poorly constructed, and there is too much repitition of the same words, be creative. Also, Mary Sue much?

12 inches??? Really. It is going to be hard to finish this, mainly after the WTF face I got after reading this so far.

I am lost!!!! But I finish any story I start. I will fight through this!!!! Celestia had nothing better to do did she???

I have no idea what to say. This wasn't good and wasn't terrible, it was a little less than okay.

where did that come from ch1-2 never mentioned an amulet

Comment posted by Therisinghero deleted Dec 29th, 2013

Sorry but that joke had to be made there is no one that I know of that has a Johnson that long without use of steroids, I mean really, you could use that to bust down a door!

oh god 3 in 1 day this guy must have the greatest of luck

the race begins

Adam wins and now he wants to..... I'm not getting this whatsoever when I first saw this fic I thought it was going to be a twilight and oc romance but I've been proven wrong now i feel that this fic is going in the direction of
"I WANT TO HAVE TEH SEX WITH ALL OF TEH PONIES" < fics like these are not usually my cup of tea but its an ok story for my standards,just not the best.

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