During an era of war, Three Mercenaries with unknown pasts have rule over all battlefields of every nation... yet there was good reason they were so feared.
The Chosen Undead is on the verge of undoing the curse of undeath cast upon humanity by Lord Gwyn, when he falls for a trap laid within the First Flame and is transported to Equestria, over a thousand years in the past.
This was a chilling read for such a short story. It told a lot in a short matter of time. When a selection was being made, I felt dread at the bottom of my stomach. I like stories that give me emotions, as if I’m actually there.
One question, though. Was the main character the one being shot or was the mare referring to a random foal about to be shot? It was a bit hard to tell.
This was a chilling read for such a short story. It told a lot in a short matter of time. When a selection was being made, I felt dread at the bottom of my stomach. I like stories that give me emotions, as if I’m actually there.
One question, though. Was the main character the one being shot or was the mare referring to a random foal about to be shot? It was a bit hard to tell.
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Ah I get that, might re write it again at some point. It was the foal narrating, the main character
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Oh, ok, I think that clarifies some things