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Pony synthesis.

For long the CMCs had tried to discover their cutie mark in order to know who they are.

When their goal was met, they would eventually crash into a new wall. A cutie mark shows the talent of a pony... but what is a pony?

A sudden spark of doubt within their chests and a zap of fear throughout their backs and arms, stronger than ever, unfolding a new challenge inside them.

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Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #1 · Sep 15th, 2022 · 1 · · Flight ·

Well, you certainly have a lot of descriptive imagery in this story, but not much else. I'm not even sure what the plot is supposed to be, if there even is one, so I have nothing to really encourage me to keep reading. Aside from that, you had quite a few mechanical errors, so I'd recommend you do some more proofreading for your future chapters.

Bronyofcuba

Bronyofcuba #2 · Sep 16th, 2022 · · · Flight ·

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What do you mean by mechanical errors?

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #3 · Sep 16th, 2022 · 1 · · Flight ·

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By mechanical errors I mean errors with the basic mechanics of the writing, things like punctuation, capitalization, and grammar, as opposed to higher-level things like plot and characterization.

Bronyofcuba