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Asteroid Tom
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I am so dissapointed this isn't about Tom or Boulder.
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Was that a sequel request?
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I'm good. Honestly not my thing at all, but very well written! I'm sure this is pretty solid for people into this genre!
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Thank you that's very nice to say.
Nice work and fun read, thought I noticed that you basically double pasted the story. Sorry to hear that you had such a rough time this past year, it was hard on everyone. Keep it up dude.
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Yes, thank you for spotting that. I Must have made a mistake when I copied it over. It's fixed now.
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Thank you, and thank you for bringing that to my attention. This is why you shouldn't edit on your phone I guess. Story looked fine when I uploaded but it was lagging so maybe the last save didn't take or something. Anyway, my bad, but it's fixed now.
Yeah, I'm trying, getting back into writing is a struggle, but I'm starting to have fun with it again. Hope your year went better than mine, friend.
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Lol anything longer than a thousand words or so is a pain in the fucking ass to edit on your phone you have my sympathies. Also I'm definitely not reading this but I hope you enjoyed writing it and I hope the people who are into this sort of thing enjoy reading it!
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I did, thank you for reading the content warning and noping out when you realized it wasn't your thing.
I really appreciate the comment.
Soldiers are gelded. Shining Armour is a soldier so that means Cadence is disappointed?
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Good point, I was planning a future chapter with them anyway.
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That offers a few options. The Princess of Love in a loving, caring relationship with her gelding husband who, depending on the details of the operation might not even have the parts to have a conventional physical relationship with her even with hormones.
And an Equestria where it really does take balls to become a guard would be different.
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That is a very different take on it than I had in mind, but I like it.
Since you’ll also make a chapter in Redhearts clinic about shining and Cadence I hope you’ll either mention some before Gelding sex to make Cadence pregnant or some kinda sperm bank donation from shining to explain how their child flurry heart came to be.
Another thing you could do in future chapters is to introduce barbs seed as an assistant (just look at her cutie Mark) maybe her first patient Will be Rumble who wants to join the wonderbolts (and being a Gelding is a requirement to join) barbs knows scootaloo wants to have Rumbles kids, and how she gets his seed Will be up for you to decide.
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Some excellent ideas, and it seems great minds think alike, for I have already planned for Babs to start working for Redheart when she got older. Rumble is a nice idea though, I was planning Snips with a mark like that you know he is destined to get the snip when he comes of age and would get along well with Babs.
The time skips I want to do is pretty much why I have such a hard time getting the story out. What I've written so far is set a few years before FiM and I have several chapters planned that takes place a decade or so in the future when some of the young characters have grown up.
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I guess do the stories you think will work pre-timeskip and then once they have been made do the time skip and switch over to writing the story from Babs perspective for a few chapters. Then we can hear about how she became a nurse and got hired by Readheart as a Gelding assistent.
Though in the future I do hope we hear more about the sperm bank in the clinic, I guess it’ll make the guys future more flexible, especially with the younger ponies from Babs generation, in a Way making Babs help the geldings and girls who love/like them have some foals in the future.
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Maybe I should split it up into three stories? Finish off the pre-show Redheart chapters and then start om the Babs arc as a new story?
I hadn't exactly planned for Babs to start out as a nurse, she takes a more circuitous route to that field. Ever wonder how she got her cutie mark?
Hmm that's brilliant, I hadn't thought about what to do with the sperm bank, but your suggestion sounds so wholesome I want to add it.
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If that's how you see it working best. Babs story might not quite gel with the Redheart theme if that's the way you want to go, so I can see it working out better seperate.
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Their stories will merge eventually, but you're right. I can start writing Babs as a separate story too.