• Published 15th Jan 2022
  • 341 Views, 6 Comments

When life is a curse - Comrade Abigor



Twilight lost all her friends to time. She is tempted to join them.

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Comments ( 6 )

' Don't be afraid. Just go away. Fade to black. Go away and don't come back[/b '

you didn't close the square bracket on [/ b], closing it should fix bold :pinkiehappy:

11122636
Why, thank you for telling:twilightsmile:

Is the anagram "desperate fool"?

11156212
*Yoda voice* Insane at puzzles, indeed you are




Sorry, i couldn't resist when i read your name lol:twilightsheepish:

11156801
You're good, it's funny.

I think you need an editor... Not just for the grammar, but for the story itself. There is something off about the story setup that just feels off to me. Like the flow of it is off. I can't pinpoint it but i feel it.

Also just throwing this out there, you didn't mention Flurry Heart.

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