President Irons finds himself and his nation trapped in the world of Equus. Knowing not how they got there, nor how to leave, he seeks council from the leader of the Ponies. Her millennia of wisdom is his only hope for maintaining his people and his sanity.
Something I've been thinking up for a time. First story here on Fimfiction, and no editor either! No idea if this'll get continued however, so for now it'll be a one shot.
I would appreciate criticism, and I hope you enjoy!
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Great start! I can't wait to see what happens for them both, and for their nations.
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I assure you, I promise sweet pai- I mean loveliness in the future.
This was good, but I wish we got the chance to see what happened.
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I do plan on more one shots, but this was definitely trying to test the waters. Any criticism is appreciated tbh.
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It was good. The relationship between the president and celestia was very nice.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of this, especially as were the first days of the arrival of humanity in Equestria. Just one question, are you treating Mexico as part of the United States country or as different countries but due to circumstances they have to join?
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Consulting with a friend who's from the country and is a historian as a hobby, my plans for Mexico currently aren't as developed as I want them to be, but the foundations for them are solid.
Suffice to say, the Transition did not bode well for any nation, but Mexico was among those hit hardest.
Looking forward to seeing where this idea goes. Keep up the great work.