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Rainbow Dash Vs. Ronald McDonald

Rainbow Dash opens the restaurant Mcdash's which brings Ronald McDonald after her to try to shut her business down.

Inspired by both Rainbow Dash Tries to Outpizza The Hut by DmitriTheWriter and Rainbow Dash Tries to Avoid The Noid by Buck swisher.

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Buck Swisher

Buck Swisher #1 · Sep 29th, 2021 · · ·

Glad to have inspired this, homes.

Overall an interesting concept, and the storyline has some promise. I will say the grammar/spelling is a bit confusing in places, as well as some of the plot elements feeling a little too copied, but it was still pretty funny. I thought the Little Caesar's dude was a good cameo.

I'll give this one a like.

Captain Neckbeard

Captain Neckbeard #2 · Sep 29th, 2021 · 2 · ·

So we could say she's not lovin' it?

BrightMac86

BrightMac86 #3 · Sep 30th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Thank you for the nice words. Yeah I just thought a little Caesar cameo would be a fun twist. I made the story fairly similar to your story and outpizzas the hut intentionally to be a sort of tribute to them. I only recently got into writing much fan fiction of any sort so I'm still working on improving my writing. Have a nice night.

BrightMac86