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Your conscience I am

Applebloom has always known right from wrong. But now suddenly her Conscience has been appearing as Yoda. But no one else seems to see him. Just a crazy idea I had for a silly one shot story. Hope somebody enjoys it.

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cerealkiller78

cerealkiller78 #1 · Sep 23rd, 2021 · · ·

palpatine should refer to himself as "The Senate"

SnowOriole

SnowOriole #2 · Sep 24th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Short and sweet. The inconsistent capital letters, missing punctuation and omitted words add an odd sort of childlike charm to it, as if it were written by Apple Bloom herself. I'm usually one to turn away from fics at the sight of poor grammar, but I enjoyed this.

Nikolas

Nikolas #3 · Sep 24th, 2021 · · ·

It was fun. You know you could make it into a series, showing how Yoda guides Apple Bloom to be a good pony, ponies starting to wonder who she is talking to, finishing it with a confrontation between their consciences (similar to the one in SW 3) the two watching/cheering them, finally ending in a silly but cute way. Just an idea

Ebony Gryphon

Ebony Gryphon #4 · Sep 24th, 2021 · · ·

She faces a might to rival bacon

BrightMac86

BrightMac86 #5 · Sep 24th, 2021 · · ·

Thank you glad you liked it. I originally was only thinking doing this one story as just a fun cute little story that stood on it's own. However I see where your coming from on a series. I don't know yet if I will will have to see if the inspiration comes to me or not. Either way I'm glad someone is enjoying the story I know I did when the idea came to me.