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Years before the mane six walked the land of Equestria, there was a group of friends who in term, have set the floor for the mane six to walk on. The story of the one colt, who separated himself along with his friends from all the others in flight, and in life. The story of the pegasi who would live and die for flying at his full speed, and for simply flying in general excitement. The story of the One of a Kind, Lightning Chaser.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 28 )

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Me and my friend are working hard on this! Trying to make it as amazing as it should be! I'll have the next chapter out by tomorrow!

1431522 THAT'S NOT SOON ENOUGH!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

1431549
The next chapter is almost as long as all the first few combined!
You won't be disappoint!

Why is all of the speech in italics?

1470198
Just to show the characters are talking

1470562 Isn't that what quotation marks are for?

1480283
I use italics to truly show when speech is present, and separate it from all the text. That way it's a bit easier to read

What about thoughts? Isn't that why the italics are there (aside from basic emphasis, which, in order to differentiate between the two, I typically use an interruption of "he/she thought" during thoughts)?

1482793
There really isn't many thoughts in this story, because it's written in a 3rd person viewpoint.

so? that's true of all of my stories, butI still have thoughts, since it allows you to get a better view of the characters' personalities. :pinkiecrazy:

1483782
thoughts won't be italicized. Problem solved. Do you like the story so far?

It's great. I haven't read the newest chapter yet, because I'm saving it for tomorrow, but I'm sure I'll enjoy it.

1483843
Glad to know! I've worked hard on this, but for whatever reason it doesn't get bumped to the front page. It's kind of disappointing I can't share it

FIRST!... um, I mean... if that's alright with you...

1574385 On this chapter, yeah. Also, I notice that we're the only two who've commented on this story. Why is that?

1574482
Because for whatever reason, Fimfic doesn't refresh it every time I add a new chapter...

Well, this was a pleasant chapter.

Cute I guess so when Dash getting into this??

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Hello Capt. Guess who? It's Xelios. Well, I liked the story thus far... Let's see how it goes. :yay:

Great start and the things that come after this chapter really adds character to your novel

2593600
? how did you dig this story up?

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