Mason The Human

Fighters for The Right to Publish Stories Involving Characters of the Species Homo Sapiens and Against the Unequal Treatment of Fimfiction Users Through The Introduction of Gold Accounts and Against Any Other Changes To Fimfiction.net Made by Poultron1,222 stories ·466 members

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The First DemonFox

The First DemonFox #1 · Dec 13th, 2021 · 3 · 1 · The time skip bitch move ·

The concept is good the execuition not as good though not bad could be better. It is riddled with misspelling that cannot be understated, though i can mostly understand the words, there are so many mispelling that it hurts to read.

The pacing in some hie and aie stories can sometimes be rushed but this was one of the most rushed i have seen in a while, with certain action or occurence being done with such a fast pace, that even an aie story had a slower pacing then it.

Lastly the timeline or order of events are very confusing since it just keeps flipping in between back and forth of events by showing them as memories or even as dreams, it slightly confused me and was only barely able to tell what is going on.

Edit: is it worth the read? Yes, if u enjoy fast aie based story since it was the vibe i got from this story.

Anon_the_writer

Anon_the_writer #2 · Dec 13th, 2021 · · · The time skip bitch move ·

Thank you for the feed back I’m not very good at writing and I want to get better so I figured what better way to receive it was from a website(not kidding or being sarcastic) I just wanted to get theses stories out of my brain so I can focus on other things really.

Blaze the draconic mage

Blaze the draconic mage #3 · Dec 25th, 2021 · · · cloud is top tier ·

I don't know why it is heavy on the dislikes, but beside a few spelling errors this is a really good story and I will fav it to read more.

Anon_the_writer

Anon_the_writer #4 · Jan 6th, 2022 · 1 · · This chapter shit is getting old ·

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Thank you for the like. My usually time I type is at night which is when I'm tired or just have a lot on my mind, so I misspell a ton and I go back and inspect. I didn't get a chance to say this but merry x-mas and happy new year.

Lucifero

Lucifero #5 · Dec 16th, 2022 · 2 · · Time skipped what ·

Keep up the good work 👍

Anon_the_writer

Anon_the_writer #6 · Jan 5th, 2023 · · · Time skipped what ·

Hey thanks lucifero that means a lot

MurderP0n7

MurderP0n7 #7 · Sep 26th, 2023 · · · Mason the Human ·

The Night Shift

What kind of five night at Freddy's is this?

Lmao

MurderP0n7

MurderP0n7 #8 · Sep 26th, 2023 · · · Mason the Human ·

I can see why the story has so many dislikes... Ehhh, I'll wait until this story is edited to read it, that or read your next story

Comet_Chaser

Comet_Chaser #9 · Oct 15th, 2023 · · · Mason the Human ·

Yeah gotta agree with the guy below me, the pacing is just atrocious tbh and the sentence structure and grammar leave much to be desired. It feels forced, robotic even. Like this was written by someone who is just learning how to make sentences in English.

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