A man trapped in a office room with a bunch of techno-colored ponies that just want the man meat between my feet.
Anon a human suddenly snapped into the world of Equestria only to fall into a coma to fight Discord. Discord is trying to take Anon's body for his own gain. Anon fights for his sanity and slowly loses his will to live and go insane. Anon depressed and lonely decides his life is only as useful as a dead person in a hospital. The Main 6 with the Princess Luna realize Anon is trapped in his own mindscape being tormented for what Anon thinks is infinity.
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I like it.
Looks promising. But please, PLEASE fix your formatting. A paragraph shouldn't be
It should never look like that. It needs to be separated per response.
Twilight asked, “How did it get here? Princess Luna!”
Luna looked over and said, “This is Discords doing.”
Twilight replied, “Why are you here? Princess Luna.”
Luna retorted, “I sensed a powerful dreamscape user in despair, fear, and sadness and tracked it back here.”
Heck, you can drop half of the descriptors with this formatting.
Twilight asked, “How did it get here? Princess Luna!”
Luna looked over and said, “This is Discords doing.”
“Why are you here? Princess Luna.”
“I sensed a powerful dreamscape user in despair, fear, and sadness and tracked it back here.”
That is some VERY misleading cover art.
Seems interesting
Hotel_chicken your right sorry about that I can edit it this weekend and fix the mistakes and Fujimi200sx sorry I couldn't find a better cover for it .... well now that I think of it I could use my profile picture.