Dashing do-gooder dog? Accomplished, affable aeronaut? Big-time brony? Lazy lackluster lackwit? You decide!
Zesty Gourmand hasn't been living up to her name, title or Cutie Mark, so an inspector is dispatchedto set her back on track... or give those three gifts to somepony new who deserves them more.
After storming out of the Tasty Treat, there is a perfect opportunity to do so. This time, a third option is considered....
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Trigger warning: Transformation.
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This was an interesting story. I suggest maybe proofreading it and I would love to expand on Zesty's new life but overall it was engaging.
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Thanks. I seem to do fairly well with my one chapter stories.
And if you DO think of something to do for Zesty in her new role, keep me posted.
Yeah echoing the initial comment, there are some mistakes here and there that are easy to correct.
Good short. I didn't really give a second thought to Zesty in the show, but she was annoying. This actually seems a kindness which is weird, changing someone's life like that.
Fun stuff.