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I like where this is going. I hope to see it continue in the near future, my friemd!
Character biographies and other non-narrative content don't belong in a chapter. You can blog about it if you like, but really that sort of content is best kept as a planning document for your own purposes, with that information then slowly revealed to the audience over time rather than all at once right at the beginning. It makes for a more compelling reading experience for your audience (which is a large part of why it's a site rule).
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And removed, sorry about that, I just figured that sense no one but me and my friend group know these characters. Sadly I wrote that chapter as an afterthought between 3 and 5 am, after I had got off work, closing shift. I’d like to think I remember the site rules well but when it’s so late it’s early, sorry about that. Realized it had to be gone when I woke up this morning, your comment just proved I remembered correctly when I got up.
I realy enjoy it. It has an interesting start with a good potential, I also haven't seen a good d&d story that is still being written.
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It's not a big deal, really, just letting you know. There's a reason most books, movies, video games, and the like don't start out by introducing you to everyone in a dry encyclopedia format. It's better to dole that information out over time.
This was a great start so far I'm actually excited for the next chapter any details of when like I know some writers do one chapter per day or will it be whenever your done with a chapter it will be posted then?
I'm really interested in this story, I hope it still continues.
A really interesting chapter, hope author is ok
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I just post infrequently, sorry
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Nothing to worry about, I just got a little preoccupied because of the events that have been unfolding through the world, health and well-being first