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Anonymous is trying to take a nap near the beach. Sugarcoat doesn't want people to think he's a homeless person, and so she wake him up. He doesn't like this.

This was originally a collaboration between myself and GreenReaper. I have translated it from second person to third person perspective as an exercise for myself. I basically had to rewrite everything except the dialogue, so other writers who try this beware. The original second person perspective story should appear on Ponepaste when it's back up and running.

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The synopsis confuses me. Why would someone think you're a homeless person just because they've decided to sleep on a bench? I've slept on benches before, and nobodies ever assumed I'm homeless.

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No idea, it was just part of the prompt. Also, he wasn't even sleeping on a bench, he was sleeping on the ground next to it. Though I guess it depends on how he looks. If we go by the context clues Anon is probably wearing some really old, baggy, ratty pants and shirt, so he might look a little homeless.

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