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Adagio Dazzle is bored. Bored with her sibling. Bored with being powerless. Bored with not having anything to DO all day. So she decides to try and make friends. Or, rather, just walk around and call people her friend until one of them gives in.
It goes about as well as expected.
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Word of advice my friend, you might want to change the tag to T rated. What with the language and the suggestive humor.
Still though, I believe I might enjoy this. Set into tracking mode.
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Thanks for that. Thought I had. Cheers.
It's funny
Change the tags to include sex...
Didn't like the new canon names for Rainbow Dash's crazed
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That's just what the wiki said they were.
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Ah. The writers chose to 'have a better idea'. 'Parental Glideance', they're officially Bow Hot Hoof and Windy Whistles, for father and mother. Which - blech, I hate the canon names, and didn't much like the episode they were named in, but yeah.
Rainbow Blaze is a much better Dashdad name, I agree.
I would have had an end twist that Adagio really likes snakes, but that's me.
Ok, we have watched canon Fluttershy acting both angry and assertive, but in this fic she is just being a bitch.
Not that AJ or Sunset were different, even if Shimmer was partially justified.
... OK then. Not sure how to take that.
Why is there not MOAR?! T____________________T
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Well Fluttershy CAN get angry, enraged even. Plus it also seems like it's HEAVILY implied that Fluttershy is Romantically/Sexually interested in Rarity, and feels jealous/threatened by Adagio.
Though what seems MUCH more out of character is her throwing animals at Adagio.
Nice Story, and now that you said it you have to write it. It's an ancient fanfiction rule I just made up, so it's binding. Another thought that poped up in my head, how it had been if one of the other two sirens had tried to make friends instead.
HAHAHAHA!
This is pretty funny.
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That Fluttershy was the most aggressive person in the story makes it much more funny.
Liked this, and the resolution was good too. One of those rare stories where I think the suggested sequel could be really good, and wouldn't overstretch the idea
Wonder if Nostalgia Critic has any of those?
You have to yell at her to interrupt her.
To be fair, she is.
Daaw. Maud may seem emotionless, but she does care about Pinkie.
I appreciate that.
You kinda stand out.
Yeah, I don't even want to EAT the Mona Lisa cake, I want to see that thing in some sort of cake museum.
I do adore when food is described like this.
Eh, same difference.
I can't say I know that by hand, but yeah, renovations can be noisy as hell.
I freaking love Sugarcoat.
WOW.
I'd have gone with Miss Frizzle, Goldilocks supposedly had golden or at least yellow hair, Adagio's is a distinct orange.
I say go for it if you can think of enough ideas to keep it running.
There is so much more untapped potential in this story!
For instance, even though things went terrible with RD's parents, there was hope for RD herself!
Not only that, but this new group she's with hasn't even had the surface scratched for what it's capable of!
That was awkward.
Well, that was a fantastic way to start the morning!
Started reading, saw you had Sunset acting like an obnoxious 12 year old on XBL, stopped & gave it a hard downvote.
Your characterization needs work.
I cannot even describe how much I love this story. Fluttershys reaction was HILARIOUS 🤣! ( fruit nazi applejack was epic
) That was a really good way to end the storyline. 11/10 would read again.
That was too awesome for me to be upset about out of character behaviour or whatever. Box of snakes should be the end of every argument.
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Windy Whistles isn't terrible as far as pony names go, but "Bow Hot Hoof" is just awkward.
Fluttershy's been watching Little Witch Academia, I see.
Wow, actially feel a little bad for Adagio now. Really seemed to be trying this time.
...What happened?
Door could have?
The n says hi!
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Stopping. As much as the two getting somehow drenched (Lack of maneuvering around the fire hydrant?) would be funny, I don't think that's what was meant to happen. :(
That was unexpected. And hilarious.
there
That was a funny way to end the story, by the way. I still think there could be more with Dash, since it was only her parents that freaked out, but it was overall quite good.
...Maybe just a epilogue about how many departments had to be called in regarding the pool?
I'm thinking something like the Coast Guard, an ambulance, the police, two SWAT cars, the national guard, and the MiB.
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i love LWA, but must admit i cant place the reference
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TV Version: When Akko asks Sucy to be friends and holds her hands out, Sucy, who doesn't want to be friends at this point, responds by covering her with snakes.
When Adagio asks to be friends, Fluttershy, who doesn't want to be friends, responds by covering Adagio in snakes.
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OMG yes 😄 i watched the OVAs a bunch when they first came out, but the tv series only once. i am deservedly chagrined
thx for the reminder!
In thanks, here’s a link to a cool LWA gif, cuz i can’t figure out how to successfully add it as a pic =\