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A letter to Celestia

Upon receiving a letter princess Celestia start to remember her old student and why he left, might they reconcile?

This is the first time i write anything and english isn't my birth language.

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Kotatsu Neko

Kotatsu Neko #1 · Jul 7th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Honestly, this reads like the outline of a story rather than a story itself.

Isseus

Isseus #2 · Jul 7th, 2021 · 2 · ·

It was a nice writing experiment. Not really a story, but the most important thing was that you got something out there for others to read. That's a really big step to take, so you can be happy about that! There are a lot of things to improve on, but they'll also help you improve your English in general, so it's well worth the time.

Elderon50