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You are such a fast writer.
And with that, you have successfully cracked me up!
anyone geddit?
Yeah, yeah, I'll stop it with the bad puns.
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The hundreth comment on this story is a pun. It's a good thing that puns are my guilty pleasure ;p
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My blessing and my curse.
So far just read the description and pretty interested
I must say I'm really enjoying the story. Eldritch horror is one of my all time favorites. Here I am waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my seat.
The cover art is nice. Did you do it yourself?
First three chapters are quite heavy on exposition. But the expositions are interesting, so it fortunately balances out. Although I gotta say, the frequent massive time skips and the lack of proper scene introduction, caused by the habit of using info dump to lead the scene, make it somewhat disorienting to read.
Still, very intriguing concept and setting. Will continue to see where it leads.
Haven't checked out the next 3 chapters yet. Will take some time to do so this week.
Also, there are a notable number of spelling and grammar mistakes. It can certainly use an editor. I am currently having quite a few projects already so I can't do thorough editing especially with the speed you publish, but if you need I can try to do some quick run through to catch the most noticeable mistakes.
Is this set in the same world as your other story?
This is such a surreal story...
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Thank you! Who doesn’t love a bit of horror beyond the mortal conception?
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I did not, I just thought it looked nice. I linked the source I got it from.
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I have recently obtained an editor, as of the newest chapter. I’m curious to hear your opinion on the most recent three chapters, since they’re a little different from the first three.
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It is not in the same world as the Queen of Storms, no.
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Just wait until we get into the meaty bits ;0
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Someone noticed!
This story is cool. Fucking weird, and really hard to follow, but cool. I hope once the world building is out of the way we get to spend lots more time with Twilight. I like stories of the eldrich horror attempting to reject their nature, kinda like the7Saviors Life is Magic
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I'd say - two chapters or so, and you'll be pleased ;0
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I just only joined on chapter six, but I can take a look through the rest :)
Will be working with Via to fix as many mistakes as I can, but even I'm not perfect and if you could highlight the mistakes that'd be extremely appreciated.
Wonderful. In all honesty, this writing reminds me somewhat of what, perhaps, a young Tolkien may write.
Except better. I never did enjoy his style. Drab and boring, whereas this is quite the opposite. I highly recommend you take time to read Camus - he seems like an author, a philosopher, that you may enjoy. I find the reading of philosophy improves ones writing, too.
I am loving this story the suspense is unreal!!!
Keep up the great work!
this is a good chapter keep up the good work
I genuinely was so lost as to who, What, and when these beings were talking. I didnt understand any of what they were talking about...or why it was important!
and that bothers me...
It's like I spent an hour reading nothing. You wrote the chapter so well. I just admit my own failings in attempting to find understanding and comprehension in WHAT was written.
It's a little hard to tell who all the "she"s are referring to in this paragraph. The second sentence is referring to Celestia for sure. I think the rest is referring to Twilight, but justifiably it could be referring to Celestia due to her age compared to the Children, and the fact that the sentence prior was referring to Celestia.
I'd expect "Those who her soul touched" when in reference to Twilight, to mean the Mane Six. However, the last one referenced would almost certainly mean Spike's egg, and there are three in Canterlot Castle, not two, so perhaps the whole thing is about Celestia. In such case, who her soul touched is a very interesting question that would be much harder to guess at.
Well now, I certainly missed that the first time. Faulyn's work, hm? I'll remember that when time comes.
So Celestia and Luna are at least five thousand years old, while the Aspects of Earth and Wind are under a thousand.
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Well I'm glad I'm not the only one, I can barely keep up what's going on in this story, it's hard to imagine things in so little detail.