Prob the best story I read in a while! Especially Twilight as a important character, hope to see more soon!

(btw first to comment I think)

Ooo! I’m glad I found this, it’s a real gem! Can’t wait for more, so many questions to be answered!

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More will be on the way. The goal is to update every third day or so. The praise is much appreciated.

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Questions will be answered. An equal amount of questions will arise.

This story is amazing. Definitely in my top ten. I can’t wait to see how magic will work in this story. A bunch of stories have different magic ways. I wonder if it will be science based or magic circles. I’m so excited for this

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A little bit of both. The magic system will have a fairly detailed, if intentionally confusing description.

You might want to check out my other story if the magic system is part of the appeal. It goes into a fair amount of detail and is pretty unique on this site as far as I can tell. It's also nothing at all like this story in terms of the magic system.

TQueen of Storms

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Adventure

An endling drakoness finds her world taken from her. An ancient force as old as Life enacts his vengeance on the world - and the bells begin to ring, as the Queen of Storms begins to stir.

• Gore
• Violence
• Death
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Celestia
• Luna
• OC
• Discord

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What's the non-con tag for?

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Minor spoilers for the story.

There will be no displays, graphic or otherwise of non-consensual sex or sex at all.
There will be implications and flat out mentions of it - and I thought it would be better safe than sorry to tag as such.

Great story! Can't wait to see how it goes!

great story can't wait for next chapter

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Sooner than you might think.

Oooh, looks interesting! Will be following!

espescially since I see Twilight

Oh, and another thing. I love your writing style!

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Thank you! Who doesn't love Twilight?

Good to hear that you enjoy my writing <3

You have my attention.

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Did I have your curiosity, before?

I hope to keep your attention - with a rather quick new chapter to bite into. Much sooner, rather than later.

A little insight into what attracted me, as I don't read as much as I used to, was the phrase, "fear the lady in lavender."

Lavender is usually associated with beauty, peace, relaxation, and soothing comfort. The connotation that it is to be related to fear, intrigues me.

I'll let you know my thoughts when I read.

Congrats! You've been featured!

You had my curiosity with the title and description, but at the end of this first chapter my good author, you have my attention.

With that title and description, you had my curiosity.

Within the first few paragraphs, you most certainly have my attention

Onward to chapter 2!

Hopefully we'll find out more about this world and how it works and stuff. Looks really interesting and fleshed out.

Oh, huh. This is... interesting.

Tonight, mere hours after the True Moon had shattered - and Celestia, much to her relief, was thankful that her corrupted sister had been imprisoned in the False Moon - this was one such occasion.

"Fear the Lady in Lavender."

the Who?

For in Canterlot, Twilight Sparkle has just been born.

Ah.....Makes sense

I'm not sure if you purposefully meant to leave out Lady Beollyssurth's aspect (I'm assuming fire from the context), but it feels off to get all the other ones' listed and hers isn't mentioned.

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Your assumption is correct, though!

I generally like slice of life stuff, but Through Chance or Fortune I have found this story. This chapter shows such promise. I love the world building and I am hooked. Rarely does a chapter affect me like this; it's happened twice: The White Horse by Carabas and Lunangrad by Cynewulf. You are in very good company. Thanks for the entertainment.

And lo! Behold the purple being, the Princess in Lavender! Reality screams into the void with the lighting of her horn, and from her mouth cometh the speech of a thousand tongues of the outer abyss! She walks among you, unnoticed, unremarkable in all but that she carries with her the life of the endless dark, the blotter of stars! She is the kin of the Crawling Chaos, the sister of the World Eater, the Devourer of Fate itself! Tremble before her ravenous craving for knowledge; fear the universe she has come to tap into. She is among you, hidden and waiting.

Beware the Lady in Lavender!

Wow, that first chapter was epic. I'm glad I decided to read.

I don't think I've ever really read dark fantasy. If they're all like this then I should fix that

You instantly know that both, someone has talent and the rest of the story will be excellent, when there's an info dump (workings of the magic system in this case) but it does not bore you. Instead it captivates you, making you wanting more.

Good show.

Me finished reading the first chapter: "he's adopted so it's OK that I'm in love with him!"
(humming Friendship is Witchcraft for the rest of the day)

Wow that's good.

Here I go on my second, far more thorough read of this wonderful story. Apologies in advance; this comment is going to be long and rambling.

Beneath the whole moon, there is a corpse lying in the far east. Skin and muscle are strewn over its grisly frame. The tongueless corpse wore a formless crown of Steel on its head, as it spoke in a voice that was not its own, moved by a mind that was not its own, gifted clarity that was not its own.

At first, I thought this must be the broken corpse of the Queen of Everything, but, it can't be. She has no skin, no flesh to be strewn over her frame. Most importantly, her formless crown is Iron, not Steel. Who was this?

What if it was the Once Great King? The remnants of his carnage and destruction bringing about his own, and the prophets he slaughtered using his body to speak once more? But, there's no way for a mortal body to last so many thousands of years. I suspect it was those slaughtered prophets speaking, but whose corpse? The corpse of one of the Children? I can't say.

And then there's this

the people looked up at the whole moon, the whole sun.

This so strongly seems to imply the people are looking up at the whole, True Moon and Sun, as the corpse lays below the whole moon. However, that's impossible as those bodies rest behind the false sky, and if the false sky were torn or shattered by this hue of rainbow, then there would be far more aftermath. Perhaps it just means they're looking up at the still-whole, undamaged False Moon and Sun.

Yeah, I think I'm satisfied with that. The question, then, is just who were the two weeping as they gazed upon the shattered True Moon? I suspect one may have been Celestia, but I know not the other.

She had met three creatures, all one step removed from the Last True God. [...] Her greatest failures, her greatest fears, and her greatest source of humility all came from these Not-Quite-Gods.

Now I have to wonder which of the Children she's met. Obviously Discord and The Eldest Daughter, her greatest failures and fears. The humility part is interesting though, it may imply she's met the Lady of the Heavens.

The news of Luna's - fall, to the Terrors Beyond had been equally devastating to them as it had been to her.

I swear I remember reading later in the story that only one or two of them even knew Celestia had a sister, and those who did know weren't aware of what happened to her. I'll pin this somewhere and bring it up again when I get to that chapter.

Minor nitpick:

Her arm splintered

I just find it a bit weird and whatnot to call a pony foreleg an arm. Doesn't seem quite right imo.

God this story gives me chills every like, three paragraphs.