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i love this new chapter too

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Huh.
That's certainly a new experience. Pretty damn giddy that this many people liked it this much.

Powers beyond comprehension? Madness induced by eldritch deities from beyond the stars? Is this like a cross over with Darkest Dungeon? Will the magic of friendship prevail over madness? Has this read been good so far; yes.

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Darkest Dungeon is indeed one of my favorite games! But it is not a cross-over: merely some form of subconscious inspiration.

Oh dear it appears a new god is born may all temple and perish before her

Is the lack of paragraphing a mistake, or on purpose?

Because I see some paragraphs that aren't supposed to be joined that are joined.

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A quick glance, and I don't see what you're referring to - so maybe it's intentional? There is a more than likely possibility that I simply misformatted something. Or, some things.

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"Tell me everything you know about it." He whispered. "Now."
"I - can't. I would - never betray my people-"
"No, you don't understand." The wolf stepped forward. "If you don't tell me everything you know - and I do mean everything, I will tear it out of your screaming, moaning body - and then I will kill you. I will kill you, I will kill everyone that you have ever known, everyone that you have ever crossed by in the street - and they will know exactly why."

Shouldn't there be a line space between paragraphs?

I see quite a few instances like this.

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You’re right, there should be. I’m just about to turn in for the night though: so I’ll fix them in the morning, assuming I remember.

I love finishing a chapter and then suddenly there's just another chapter that wasn't their when I started. Anyways, definitely interested in some Twilight the filly God time.

A full story instead of one-shots with Twilight being an all-powerful god. Count me in!

Can't wait to see how this goes.

I want to see what kind of life Twilight can have when her mere presence can kill.

She is basically a walking sanity check for anyone who isn't as powerful as Celestia.

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Who doesn't a bit of Twilight taken to an extreme? As for one-shots: I'm inclined to agree. Stories like the Stars Ascendant are just - hauntingly short. The goal, ideally, is for a fill of some fledgling divine Twilight.

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She does seem to have some form of control over it, considering that Steelshy wasn't crushed to a pulp. Regardless - life will be difficult for her, to put it lightly.

In the description you said this story was "part of Gods and monsters".

Where can I find that?

If there is a story before this one i need to read them in order.

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There is another story set in the Of Gods of Monsters universe - called Freedom's unRule.

I would like to emphasize that this story will be standalone. It will not require reading Freedom's unRule, or any other Gods and Monsters story I decide to publish. It might give a bit more context, though.
You might find it more enjoyable - going into this with a slightly heavier hint of mystery. Alternatively, here's an embed.

EFreedom's unRule

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Mystery

The laws of the universe are his pet puppy dog. Physics are a suggestion at best, while logic and reason are his scorned ex-spouses. A preview into Discord's life, and the History of Equestria. Part of Of Gods and Monsters.

• Alt. Universe
• Celestia
• Luna
• OC
• Discord

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haha funny joke amniomorphic haha

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In this universe at least, it was originally amnionmorphic, and is used for the restoration of blood. Over time, people just referred to it as the amniomorphic spell.

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Oooooh. Gods and monsters is a world. Got it. Well then imma give this twilight one a read!

Well shoot....now I'm VERY intrigued.

More please!!

>christ
interesting that theres no human tag

From what it looks like so far, Celestia is a fool. I wonder what the other aspects will have to say about this.

Something about your prose is just, so truly excellent. This bit, especially, seems to connect with me.

Master-Commander of the Standing Equestrian Army, Master-Commander Steelshy Blade - looked at this filly. She looked at this filly, and she saw the world - burning underneath her hooves. Grass turning into glass, dirt splashing like waves as death and fire rained from her horn. She looked at this filly, and she saw the skies - the hands and hooves of a thousand creatures reaching towards the Outer Beyond - for, with her guidance, anything was in reach. She saw a thousand things, a thousand possibilities -

If you were to summarize this passage to me, I would say it's likely a rather innocuous or unexceptional concept. Yet, it manages to bring me almost to tears and I can't even say why.