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Hooooooly. That was an intense chapter. I'll help edit it later :)
Also, SMART TWI SMART TWI SMART TWI SMART TWI
And oh, there's where Pinkie went.
Twilight might be an Eldritch Abomination, but she's an adorable one
Poor, poor Pinkie. And Rainbow. Let's hope they can heal. Let's hope they can have true lives after it's all said and done
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Wow, that comment felt like a whole journey.
If I decide to read it I kinda hope it lives up to the expectations you just set. I know you didn't mean for those expectations to be positive but oh well. Lol
I love this incomprehensible god/house cat so much.
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Glad to hear it didn’t deter from reading the story :) even more so that you enjoyed!
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Let’s hope she doesn’t start bringing her ponies ;0 that would be significantly less cute!
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I'm glad too.
Rereading it, does that mean Pinkie can see the future? :O
Its quite disturbing that*s even after all Celestias work, Twilight stiil weapon that kill everything in this vision.
What can save save world from desolation?
Love? Friendship?
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I will explain. The story still may not interest you and that's cool. I will say for myself their is a story and it is both filled with hope and horror's.
But, the question is...which ones are the greater horror?
1. At the begining their was queen. Is uber god thing.
She had kids.
Then they had kids.
And life was made and destroyed all the while some life went far, far indeed. Thus enter Twilight...what she is...essentially a living machine, something that can warp reality and the arrgoance of the character Celestia...
Because under all the evils in this world and the hidden player's. The question being asked by this story and by the author...is...
Is this Twilight redeemable or you know...not a evil evil butt like her grandmother.
Where confusion is that there are many plot's and that feeling of discomfort is important. (In my opinion) for me it least this story is actually partial history text then just pure narrative. Because largely through the story you glimpse hope. But...odd thing is...it is payed in blood. This is not because folk's on upper immortal scale don't care...
But, that the forces that exist...that are greater then them want them dead.
Enter again, Twilight...who by word of her father is a another attempt at killing his mother who is uber uber uber evil.
And who everyone fear's. The price in making Twilight and keeping her alive may doom them anyway...because fundammentally it is implie that inspite of cruelty.
Even these god things die. Thus what may remain is Twilight or her grandmother.
Now...this the broad strokes...of what I understand. I also want to say it is confusing but I think in general it is about being a little confused...after all and this is opinion...
We are dealing with forces we can not understand thus thing's happen fast very fast and overwhelmed.
Now could the author have done differently...maybe...but I kind of like it. It has a edge of grim dark with out going into edgelord. One boo boo and you bleed a fountain territory.
I also add as closing thought's and if this help's the story. Is largely a mythic kind of story...where their is almost a fear of even fighting. Because even with all the plan's we know not where it will lead.
Ps. I WAS also confused. I just asked the author. And they cleared all swell for me. I did not know who the queen was...
Pps. I am thinking ultimately you want a a to b or more straight forward story.
Ppps. One of the themes of the story seems to the escalating stakes. We ounce thought the children were scary or that maybeCelestia and her brood of immortal were sketchy...they arent the worst lot.
So...hope this helps and did not confuse you in slightest!
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Silly. Pinkie has always been able to. And also not. And everything in between.
All the time, all the times, all at once and never at all.
Cosmic Twilight making friends is still just the fucking best, I love this story so much, this chapter was well worth the wait!
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That's essentially correct.
The story is tragic and dark, with an underlying theme of hope being a faint, but possible reality. The story is also meant to be a little confusing - the narrative is jarred and jumbled, there are frequent and sudden skips...one part for pacing and to keep a nice tempo, almost, going, and another part because that's just sort of how I write.
I am always more than willing to explain in a less esoteric manner to those who are confused to the point where it detracts from the story, but that summary is essentially correct.
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Pinkie Sense, but dialed up to 10x. It becomes a bit more clear and a bit more confusing in the next chapter!
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The future can always change. Let's hope it does.
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It's still, ultimately, a Friendship is Magic story - if a bit twisted to put it lightly.
What is she, a cat?