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How did Velvet get here from bar hopping, again?
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Perks of being an eldritch horror: you get a discount on boat rides!
Welp, time to see if Twilight inherited immortality from Daddy Dearest! Unless it's common to just, you know - get better after being torn in half.
Hmm. That happened. I was going to ask a series of questions but...well?
What are you aiming for with them being born all at ounce? If Twilight is evil abomination + kind of nice? Do the others win at...life? Or is it all cards for old twilight? And how will she use the elements of harmony? Would it matter anyways? Since murder and casual cruelty seem the norm in this world?
Further are you going explore if...Celestia makes a mistake that Twilight could see and...know as a mistake? What would her reaction be to such a thing?
Well this all well established. I wonder after...would Twilight...really destroy the world? If Celestia dies? Like I know this a deal and all? But if she...actually loves Celestia? etc. You know?
Ps. Will Spike appear in the story? Because I have some ideas for his appearance but... I would rather not spoil anything.
Pps. Good chapter though that ending...dude. I would say your writing has improved their is a sense of things in motion. But, I am a little confused. Though I think that is intentional.
Pps. Is Luna the nice one?
Ppps. I am getting god of humanity, Warhammer vibes from Celestia.
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There's a reason that they were all born at once. Maybe they might, "win at life" as you put it in the future - but certainly not without a helping hoof of pain leading up to that.
To quote this very own chapter - She is fallible.
Hm ;0
[5] Asgard - "One of Frost's eyes snapped open - and in the bowels of the Dragonlands, a black egg twitched."
That isn't necessarily Spike. Or maybe it is. Who's to say?
It does have the mystery tag, after all.
It's all relative! So - "maybe."
She does use a flaming glaive - that's essentially a sword. Just pointer ;0
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To show the power of Flex-Tape, I sawed this unicorn in half!another great chapter
seems kinda pog innit
'Tis but a scratch!
... oh yeah
ruh roh, I don't think Twilight Velvet is on the invite list to Celestia's personal garden, we're gonna have to do something about that.
Does anyone think grinding a corpse, even if animated/undead, to dust counts as killing, cause she promised Celestia not to kill, if not we may have our first dose of Twilight rampage yet
I'm lost, I don't know what's going On.
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In a good "it's a mystery story" way, or in a - "I need an explanation" way?
when velvet hits you with the dollar store laser attack: "that's it?"
Now that I am caught up…
This is the sort of dimensional reality that would catch the attention of my OC…a terrifying, powerful, and ancient being. This story intrigues me, and has definitely earned a spot in my library once I figure out where to categorize it. But I feel that Shadow-Arrow will be visiting me tonight.
It won't be so simple. It's never so simple: Something so terrible cannot be destroyed so easily.
Yeah, that escalated quikly.
I like this implication: the idea that even ponies who aren't prone to flowery language just can't quite describe Twilight and what they think of her without going into metaphor and imagery. That she's simply beyond direct description by a normal pony.
Ah, Chekhov's Sunset Shimmer.
In all honesty though, I do hope we at least hear about Sunset, I've always liked her.
What a coincidence! They were just talking about you, how nice of you to show up!