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When the author is speed. Even me, her editor, is like, wtf.
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You know a little about both, but rather positively.
this is epic.
I thought I was getting a grip on this story, now it'a slipping away again.
Still awesome though
You know I liked your expositions before. Or. .didnt mind them. But, now I rather like them. They really ease you in...to your story.
Ps. Im going to take stab at that myself. I am looking to trim my more flowery and epicy writing style. So...thanks.
Pps. The chappie was bamming so kudos!
Ppps. What stretchs out beyond the curtain of the false sun and moon? Like is eldritch horrors then other universe?
Pppps. Does 2 + 2 = fish in your universe?
hold onto your shit boys things are about to get wild
anther great chapter
There is NO Brakes on this crazy train! This story just gets more and more intense.
Will Steelshy be okay? I quite liked the contrast that shyshy Fluttershy's mother is one of the deadliest mortals around
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vroom
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Here are a few excerpts from Freedom's unRule.
As for 2 + 2, it depends on what you're adding. 2 ponies + 2 ponies = 4 ponies, but 2 eldritch horrors + 2 of anything else = fish. Or, if you're Discord.
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;0
It's honestly ridiculous that over 3 days you've released 8 chapters.
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vroom
Gotta give the people what they want ;0
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Did you have a bunch pre-written before you started posting? Or are you just slamming out words that fast? Either way, I'm definitely happy with it.
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The latter :p
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You're crazy and that's a good thing
I loved the exposition on the way a few types of magic function, and how profoundly different they are. The idea that magic is no one thing, that it is what the creatures who use it make of it is a really cool one.
Oh, white blood? That's certainly unique among the established red and pink we know of. I wonder if any other creatures have white blood, and what it might mean if they do - even if they don't have that fascinating, sweet sap-like consistency of Twilight's.
This makes me further interested in the nature of the Iampex. It has access to lost spells that none should have ever been able to learn(I'd expect what seems to be a signature spell of Grogar's to be a rather well-kept secret), is in some way Faulyn's "work", and aspects of it "burn with [a mockery of] the light of the True Sun".
The descriptions that say it's out of place in this world and its contradictory, maddening nature, and most especially the line: "as she hurtled into the heart of the Terror." It has to be associated with the Terrors Beyond somehow, especially being so titled such. What was Faulyn doing, fucking around with them? And what does the Eldest Daughter know? Is this one of them, manipulated or changed in some way by Faulyn? A mimickery, brought about by foolhardy research? Or something else?
God that must be especially traumatic for poor Applejack. Losing a limb to a creature wearing the face of your mother, hearing her voice tell you to come to her and feeling compelled to do so as it prepares to consume you whole.
This is metal as hell. Baller line.
Not as metal as the first appearance of Twilight's true form though, that shit gave me chills. The light can burn indeed.