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Daaaaang. That's some heavy stuff right there.
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I - am definitely going to use that line in the story.
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I spaced it out different, this chapter - and I think it's much more readable now. Thanks for the advice.
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hah. whoops.
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Considering how this story started, it would be strange if it wasn't ;p
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Btw, just wondering, do you have an editor?
Just a random question :3
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My editor is my one true love - Grammarly. Asides from that, nope! ;p
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Heh. Grammarly does have the tendency to make mistakes at times. If you wish, I could help you, I'm decent, I guess.
Not the best, of course, but I do try my best.
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Is this another story, and if so, link?
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I actually just edited the description to explain a bit better. Regardless; here's the comment.
A name for the alternate universe that this is set in. To copy and paste another comment that explained it quite well:
There is another story set in the Of Gods of Monsters universe - called Freedom's unRule.
I would like to emphasize that this story will be standalone. It will not require reading Freedom's unRule, or any other Gods and Monsters story I decide to publish. It might give a bit more context, though.
You might find it more enjoyable - going into this with a slightly heavier hint of mystery. Alternatively, here's an embed.
- MLP: FiM
- Dark
- Mystery
The laws of the universe are his pet puppy dog. Physics are a suggestion at best, while logic and reason are his scorned ex-spouses. A preview into Discord's life, and the History of Equestria. Part of Of Gods and Monsters.10870935
I might just take you up on that :0
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Well, just send me a dm on fimfic or on Discord (iAmSiNnEr#0204) if you ever wanna! :)
Hm... I wonder what will happen when Daddy Dearest realizes Twilight is alive.
It will probably be fine. He sounds like a swell guy after all.
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This reminded me of something rather amusing behind the scenes: In my notes for the story - Frost is loosely described as an "Immortal Dick."
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Happy to hear you're enjoying it.
And I must confess - the reaction to the end of Chapter 4 is rather - pleasing.
You keep calling Frost "a man"
Is he human? ARE there humans?
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Frost is an 8'0 bipedal wolf - but he was not always a bipedal wolf. The term for a male wolf is man, and man remains as a catchall species-neutral term for "male creature."
Once, he was close to a human. Once, he was a deer. He's very old, and has taken many forms - but there will be no humans in this story. Probably.
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Got it. Thanks
Was sooo confused!
And thankfully no, there won't be humans? Good. That makes me happy
this is a good chapter well on to the next after a little bit of a youtube break
Cause people are ‘sensitive’ (note, weak) idiots who can’t accept face-value/straightforward/honest comments/questions.
That’s…putting mildly. Very mildly. No need to sugarcoat it.
So the Adamantia is some inherent feature of the world. Interesting...
The first quotation, from the first chapter, appears to apply to all of the Aspects, which makes this particular passage in this chapter a bit confusing the first time through, as they seem contradictory at the surface. Maybe some sort of clarifying sentence, like "at least, those who had been yet born" or something like that. Certainly threw me for a loop when I first connected the two statements.
Her terrors, huh? I know for sure those terrors were not made nor controlled by She-Who-Rules. This gives some insight to what the folly of the Once Great Deer may have caused.
A demon child destroying the moon? More like a demon child destroying the universe, if she wanted to.
I like overpowered Twilight stories but not ones where there evil, except in this story Twilight doesn't seem evil, more like misguided.
Something like; born from darkness, forged in light, which Is funny because there Is a story called "Born from Light, forged in darkness" or something like that, I haven't read the story just the first couple of words of the first chapter and the description and that's it.