• Member Since 1st Apr, 2013
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Thunder--Dash


A musician with over 20 years of experience who loves to write stories with deep emphasis on positive values and the dangers of taking the wrong path.

Comments ( 7 )

While i'm not into the whole fetish thing, or at least this part of it.

This story is quite good.

10772378
I understand. Yes, this story has strange fetishes, but that's not its main focus. More will come together as later chapters are written. Anything that stuck out to you?

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The fact that Rarity would give up her body like that is odd, since she cares so much about her looks.

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She is the element of generosity and would do anything to help others. She really didn't know that it was going to be that bad, but Green did warn her that the whole thing was still in the beta phase.

I have to ask will Applejack and Rarity get paired up, Apple Jack is so touched by Rarity sacrifice.
Can see it.

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They will be paired up again in due time.

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