10716418 10716435 Just in case y'all missed it, I'm gonna be putting out 2 chapters a day. There are 13 total chapters, an epilogue, and a short bonus chapter!
You know with how many love Chrysalis has been receiving, I'm actually surprise she is not experiencing Thorax transformation, maybe it act slower in changeling queens. Either case something tells me it will happen and when it does, Anon will have yet another adventure waiting.
Leech, I would love to read what is sure to be your greatest gift to humanity so far, but alas, Anon doth killeth mine enjoyment of this great monument to all our worldly sins. So here I sit, alone, bereft of your unholy light. For I have committed the most unforgivable of sins, that of having standers to my debasement. Oh Messiah of Debauchery, can you forgive me?
But seriously, keep up the good work and keep the smut flowing, even if it's stuff I don't like. If it makes you happy then I'm happy for you.
10717042 Just replace "Anon" with any other name I didn't write him like the shitposty version that some people prescribe to him; I wrote him like generic human protagonist #5189
May I ask why you use Anon in this story, and not a proper named character? I can understand a 2nd person story using anon for whatever immersion it helps, but this is a story where the character is fully fleshed out with thoughts and feelings of his own.
10717319 I think Anon has transformed into a character of its own in general. Most stories that include some form of Anon give him a specific character type. He hasn't been about immersion in a while.
10717319 Simply because Anon is a wholly unrealistic name. If I'd used John or Steven or Jerome or George, it may make folks feel less included. By using Anon, anyone/everyone should be able to enjoy it!
10717319 anon has at this point become his own character on fim, for a over the top human character, and it also help that normally with anon you can focus on story without having to develop a deep backstory, no messing about with how he get to equestria just focus on whacky adventures
'While most of his load trapped deep within her' - either 'While most of his load was trapped deep within her' or 'With most of his load trapped deep within her'
“No, it’s cold and they can sleep with us tonight,” he firmly stated, overcome with some unknown paternal urge - that was, until a sudden concern hit him. “They won’t get squished in bed with us, will they?”
“Grubs and hatchlings often use eggs as makeshift balls, so I’m sure they’ll be fine,” she muttered, nodding in and out of consciousness.
Man, changeling older siblings are brutal ass holes! They don't even wait until their younger siblings are hatched and breathing, before picking on/bullying them!
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this doesn't have a sex tag, seems like it should from reading the description
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YOU SAW NOTHING!
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NO i saw it too.
Also, this is one of my favorite Queen Chrysalis stories so far!! Looking forward to the rest of the chapters!!
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Just in case y'all missed it, I'm gonna be putting out 2 chapters a day.
There are 13 total chapters, an epilogue, and a short bonus chapter!
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Something like 8-9 months.
Been chipping away at it between commissions, collabs, trades, and promotional stuff for art packs.
I understand bronies love thier clops
But are there any Anon/human x Chrysalis romantic comedy fics with hijinks?
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Spoilers, dude.
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There are hijinks in this; they're pretty lewd, granted, but they're hijinks nonetheless!
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Ohhh, now I want to keep reading, jejeje this might get interesting
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I assure you, chapter four is where it just starts getting good...
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alright, this is good
Is that Anthro or just a really weird pose/angle
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It's feral. Chrysalis is just a very flexible bug-horse!
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I bookmarked it
So I'll be sure it give it a read
'Bout time you posted this here
This has just started, and already this is my favorite anon/chrissy story.
Though, I am surprised that I haven't seen extra kinky and lewd hand/hoof holding.
You know with how many love Chrysalis has been receiving, I'm actually surprise she is not experiencing Thorax transformation, maybe it act slower in changeling queens. Either case something tells me it will happen and when it does, Anon will have yet another adventure waiting.
Leech, I would love to read what is sure to be your greatest gift to humanity so far, but alas, Anon doth killeth mine enjoyment of this great monument to all our worldly sins. So here I sit, alone, bereft of your unholy light. For I have committed the most unforgivable of sins, that of having standers to my debasement. Oh Messiah of Debauchery, can you forgive me?
But seriously, keep up the good work and keep the smut flowing, even if it's stuff I don't like. If it makes you happy then I'm happy for you.
Thicc thighs save lives
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If consensual hoof holding tickles your metaphorical pickle - boy howdy - you better hold onto your butt....
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Just replace "Anon" with any other name
I didn't write him like the shitposty version that some people prescribe to him; I wrote him like generic human protagonist #5189
Great, as per usual. Loving what's done so far and cant wait for the next chapters to be uploaded.
May I ask why you use Anon in this story, and not a proper named character? I can understand a 2nd person story using anon for whatever immersion it helps, but this is a story where the character is fully fleshed out with thoughts and feelings of his own.
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I think Anon has transformed into a character of its own in general. Most stories that include some form of Anon give him a specific character type. He hasn't been about immersion in a while.
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Nice!!
nice work on chapters out so far
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Simply because Anon is a wholly unrealistic name. If I'd used John or Steven or Jerome or George, it may make folks feel less included. By using Anon, anyone/everyone should be able to enjoy it!
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Thanks!
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did you not see the contortionism bullshit she pulled in the show in the hive?
Really hoping this doesnt end up as short as some of your other stories, liking it so far :)
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No. I didn't see the newer episodes
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anon has at this point become his own character on fim, for a over the top human character, and it also help that normally with anon you can focus on story without having to develop a deep backstory, no messing about with how he get to equestria just focus on whacky adventures
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here
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I'm not into this sort of thing but I can see how someone who is would be turned on during that particular instance
ah yes, the art cover scares me
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yeah i agree it more like creepy bug thing to me
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https://darkpony.space/pastoralnyj-fanfik-pro-krizalis/
Have you read this? Pastoral fanfic about Chrysalis.
Buggos eggos!
'While most of his load trapped deep within her' - either 'While most of his load was trapped deep within her' or 'With most of his load trapped deep within her'
Ahhh Leech, the most salaciously depraved individual in Fim. Keep up the gold
Awesome & funny story so far!
Oh, BTW, congrats on your #200!
All she really needed was true love...
One bombshell of a chapter! I love it ♡
Man, changeling older siblings are brutal ass holes!
They don't even wait until their younger siblings are hatched and breathing, before picking on/bullying them!
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It was super creepy when I first saw it, and I loved it.
And suddenly hes the proud father of 10...
I be ok with 2 but 10? Yeah...
That one Tarterus of a challange...
The legend of Anon in this timeline has truly started.
Don't know if he is here on or his Friendship is magic School timeline more glorious