God damn dude, you hired some seriously elite onion cutting ninjas.
I don't think I've been so invested in a character's development as I am with Chrysalis here. It honestly feels like a believable individual and I think that's in part due to how consistent her interactions have been. Gotta say how you've written her is my favourite version I've read.
The best thing about this whole story is the slow burn of it all. Sometimes it’s just all, I love you and I’m no longer a villain or stuff like that. This right here is that good stuff though. Slowly changing her attitude but not her personality over time with love. Lots and lots of love. And sex. Lots of that too.
Heh, even if they tried anything, Chrissy has a year's worth of love stockpiled inside her. If she could defeat Celestia from a week of a standard lovestruck pony, imagine what she could do with the massively more potent and volumous love of Anon!
Coming to rest between the Celestia and his best man/dragon, he made a concerted effort to square his shoulders, stand proud, and not look like he was about to faint. His eyes scanned the sea of colorful quadrupeds and a handful of bipeds, pausing briefly to smile and wave at his offspring in the front row, before the first notes of a haunting tune cut through the air. Standing at the side of the great chamber, atop a small platform, sang a lone kirin.
Celestia is indeed, the one and only Celestia.
Was the kirin Autumn Blaze, or a random no name kirin?
Honestly, it's been so long since I last read a fic with a song embedded in it, that I was confused by the underlined words. The last time I read a fic with a song in it, was probably while season 3 was airing.
“Just who’s side are you on?” Cadance groused. “It’s not like they didn’t step on you once they had the bell.”
“My dear,” the chimera laughed, instantly appearing with his arm around the love Princess’ shoulder, “I’m on the same side I’ve always been on - chaos.”
That's some true Chaotic Neutral (CN) energy right there. In the Gameloft game, Discord says that he's CN, during the O&O related quests.
“I’m just happy not to be a resting spot for pigeons,” Tirek remarked. Stretching his brawny arms, he filled his lungs and deeply exhaled. “Do you know what it feels like being locked in a cowering position for years?”
“It is nice being out,” the diminutive pegasus added, releasing the Princess and fluttering back to the centaur’s side.
Anon looks at Cozy Glow with a scrutinizing expression, trying to remember where he'd met the filly before. He also wondered why she evoked memories of being a school janitor, despite never having such a job.
LATER IN THE EVENING AT THE RECEPTION
As Anon made his way to the bar to get more champagne, Cozy zipped up to the man, and hovered close to his ear and whispered, "I really liked it when you fucked my face, and treated my throat like a sex toy. I especially liked it when you tied me up, and mercilessly fucked me, like my cervix owed your cock money." Anon turned his head towards Cozy Glow with an expression of shock, confusion, and horror. Cozy Glow hovered away, and said at a normal volume, "Pfft! Every pony gets me confused for a filly! I'm an adult mare that just looks like a filly, but I just don't correct anypony. So many discounts and free admittance tickets as a filly! Anyways, congrats on the marriage!" Cozy turns, flicks her tail to briefly show her goods that are hidden by her dress and tail, and flies off to join some younger changelings. A shell shocked Anon watches Cozy Glow leave. Tirek, clutching an empty Moscow mule mug, walks up behind Anon and states, "Ah, I see she also remembers the timeline where you were a school janitor, fucking his way through the non pony student body. You face fucking Cozy Glow was the most entertaining thing to happen in Tartarus." Maintaining the silent expression of shock, confusion, and horror, Anon turned to face Tirek. Silently hoping for an explanation. With a shrug, Tirek stated, "For some reason, getting imprisoned in stone causes you to gain memories of similar timelines."
What Anon makes for a difference i could recommend a story where this trio are responsible for Billions of death if not reformed... Quite the huge story...
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Trust me, Anon was worried too
This has some really sweet feels to it. Can't wait to see how you plan to wrap it up.
Love this story
but what about the honeymoon?
they have to go on a honeymoon and make a honeymoon clutch!
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Be patient, consarnit!
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If only...
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I'm sure the bouquet made it out unsullied!
D'awwww ~
Ooooh, those two would make for some hilarious hijinks.
Ahhh, nothing like some good emotional blackmail.
....and here I was wondering if Chryssy would transform into a reformed 'ling after getting married, but then again, we do love her as she is!
God damn dude, you hired some seriously elite onion cutting ninjas.
I don't think I've been so invested in a character's development as I am with Chrysalis here. It honestly feels like a believable individual and I think that's in part due to how consistent her interactions have been. Gotta say how you've written her is my favourite version I've read.
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Y'all are too kind!
Jus gonna put this here for the mobile users......
You are the Stephen King of alternately lewd and heartwarming horse words
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I try my best =w=
Aw, damn it, them ninjas are straight up pouring onion juice in the vents now, this story makes me HAPPY.
The best thing about this whole story is the slow burn of it all. Sometimes it’s just all, I love you and I’m no longer a villain or stuff like that. This right here is that good stuff though. Slowly changing her attitude but not her personality over time with love. Lots and lots of love. And sex. Lots of that too.
I feel like Tirek would be a bro to chill with sit back do some fishing that sort of thing
Kinda Pog
*Sees title, summary and picture*
I see the promise of a good time
Going from Doom making me scream in pure rage to marriage making me despise onions even more is what I'd call a perfect day
Heh, even if they tried anything, Chrissy has a year's worth of love stockpiled inside her. If she could defeat Celestia from a week of a standard lovestruck pony, imagine what she could do with the massively more potent and volumous love of Anon!
So not a singel word of the by now super pregnant Empress Chrysalis? Her Empire is growing one child at a time.
to be honest i wouldve stepped in and told luna to shut the hell up and take a seat.
What time is it?” he blithely asked, scanning the assembly for the Princesses
Its ADVENTURE TIME!!!!!
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And with that, Chrysalis is married!
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Celestia is indeed, the one and only Celestia.
Was the kirin Autumn Blaze, or a random no name kirin?
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You're a gentleman/lady, and a scholar!
Honestly, it's been so long since I last read a fic with a song embedded in it, that I was confused by the underlined words.
The last time I read a fic with a song in it, was probably while season 3 was airing.
That's some true Chaotic Neutral (CN) energy right there.
In the Gameloft game, Discord says that he's CN, during the O&O related quests.
Anon looks at Cozy Glow with a scrutinizing expression, trying to remember where he'd met the filly before.
He also wondered why she evoked memories of being a school janitor, despite never having such a job.
LATER IN THE EVENING AT THE RECEPTION
As Anon made his way to the bar to get more champagne, Cozy zipped up to the man, and hovered close to his ear and whispered, "I really liked it when you fucked my face, and treated my throat like a sex toy. I especially liked it when you tied me up, and mercilessly fucked me, like my cervix owed your cock money." Anon turned his head towards Cozy Glow with an expression of shock, confusion, and horror. Cozy Glow hovered away, and said at a normal volume, "Pfft! Every pony gets me confused for a filly! I'm an adult mare that just looks like a filly, but I just don't correct anypony. So many discounts and free admittance tickets as a filly! Anyways, congrats on the marriage!"
Cozy turns, flicks her tail to briefly show her goods that are hidden by her dress and tail, and flies off to join some younger changelings.
A shell shocked Anon watches Cozy Glow leave.
Tirek, clutching an empty Moscow mule mug, walks up behind Anon and states, "Ah, I see she also remembers the timeline where you were a school janitor, fucking his way through the non pony student body. You face fucking Cozy Glow was the most entertaining thing to happen in Tartarus." Maintaining the silent expression of shock, confusion, and horror, Anon turned to face Tirek. Silently hoping for an explanation.
With a shrug, Tirek stated, "For some reason, getting imprisoned in stone causes you to gain memories of similar timelines."
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Wow. Um. Holy shit.
Damm.
Cozy Glow could help the Griffon empire or some rather distributed/ economic poor nation as to be useful and be powerful.
What Anon makes for a difference i could recommend a story where this trio are responsible for Billions of death if not reformed... Quite the huge story...