A long time ago, there used to be three main pony species; the pegasi, masters of the sky, Unicorns, students of Magic, and normal ponies, strong, durable, and workers of the earth. Above them the alicorns ruled, for a time. Eventually, the pegasi and unicorns vanished and faded into obscurity, and with them, the alicorns; leaving the earth ponies to themselves. These eventually were to be viewed only as myths. But the alicorns still watched over Equestria. Sometimes they would disguise themselves as normal ponies and have children, who would go on to influence history, but the alicorns forever lurked in the shadows.
Luna is tricked by her sister into having a foal. She chooses her best friend from over 1000 years before.
However can she get around the oath that she made to remain pure?
Interesting concept and an adorable cover image.
But the chapters need to be a lot longer.
(The downvote was not by me)
1210538>> This is an old story I made before I was a brony that I'm rewriting to fit..... its a quite long story at least.
Might I ask why the story's status is complete while the last chapter felt like there's more ?
I don't think that Deus Ex Machina are appropriate, even for this sort of a story. Also, you should mention in the description that it is a Mash-Up (not a crossover, but a Mash-Up) with... whatever the name of the series with Camp Half-blood and/or its sequel series was called.
What was Jamie doing? Had he completed his quest?
-Name needs fixing.
Tallahorsee........hmmmm.........Tallahassee?
I'm confused...Are they human or pony...You keep switching between descriptions like "toes" and "hooves"....
Let me guess the nightmare spears a banana cause you know where i get my bananas ON THE MOOOOOONNAAAA
IT TASTES LIKES CHICKEN YA DINGBAT