One day, a young 7 year old kid named Nicky was riding his bike back from school. However, he finds a strange baby horse in the woods and decides to take care of it. However, he's a bit to young raise a baby Alicorn foal.
Story somewhat Inspired by My Little Dashie
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You need a proof reader. And add some more sentences to tell the details a bit.
Now that I have said the criticism, I hope how this story will go in the future.
Grammar is 3/10 my guy
Also the opening scene(especially with them talking about porn) reminded me heavily of the movie Good Boys.
dang. he's too young to know about porn. Good thing it is the high schoolers talking about it. In my mind, I thought he went to a website or something.
Grammar and sentences short but still, I get it.
8/10
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I love that movie
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Best damn kids-cursing movie 2019 gave us.
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yeah
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well The 3rd chapter has Sombra appear
InTEreSTInG
Marcus: Smort
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lol
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you know, this is a trilogy of stories we're humans find and take care of Flurry.
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Not much fun when you go and spoil the plot for us, you know.
Ahh yes the classic flurry
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you feel bad for Nicky
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yes
yes i do
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also there was a movie reference I put in there
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which is?
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Three men and a baby
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haven’t watched it
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oh
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she saw Nicky using the remote
Sombra driving a car!
I wanna see
nice story but when will the next chapter come out?
