A Young little human girl named Marie Keeble, a very young child who was Super Hero known as 'Crystal Guardian' She's maybe a very young child but she is very kind, care and a pure heart to peoples she cares about, and also her partner Rosalie who actually a Dragoness, Both of them came from called 'Earth', However, she and her partner transported into another different world known as "Equestria" Now its time to start a new journey, along with the new friend unicorn who join with them Angel "Rose" Heart brand new adventures, and protect from the evil of darkness.
(This story only take places before Season one base in 2010)
(This is my very first story)
[Update] Rated: Everyone and +10; Adventure, Fantasy Violence, Comedy, Drama, Mid-Language, Animated Mid-Blood {Not too Blood}, Action, Supernatural, Magic, and Alt. Universe
[Update] Publisher: Square Enix, Sega, Sonic Team, and Hasbro
MLP's Characters belong to Hasbro [Lauren Faust]
[Update] My OCs Characters [Mine]
Detail idea/Edited/Author/Writer: Guardian-of-Juctice (Me)
Co:Writer: Jazz316
[Update] Logo designed Commission: NusyRush from Twitter
[New Update] Articst Book Cover Commission: Dormin-Dim from DA
Just from the synopsis alone, I can tell this is in dire need of an editor; The grammar is absolutely atrocious.
It does sound pretty interesting though, if it gets cleaned up, I'll most definitely read it.
What you have is genuinely interesting and I can tell that there is a lot of effort put in, just needs some editing to get some grammar stuff out of the way. Will track for now.