Forgotten

It does not make any sense. Rainbow wakes up one day to find that nopony can see her, nor does anypony care. She desperately tries to find ways to somehow undo whatever is going on. The problem is, she doesn't know where to start.

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HiddenEntity

HiddenEntity #1 · Jan 7th, 2021 · 2 · ·

Ohhh that hit on a spiritual level holy crud

TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #2 · Jan 7th, 2021 · · ·

I'm confused.

NebulaNyx

NebulaNyx #3 · Jan 7th, 2021 · 1 · ·

that was dark, really, really dark.

Jeffmusic5

Jeffmusic5 #4 · Jan 7th, 2021 · 6 · ·

The idea was good (something similar to the movie the sixth sense), but the problem is that the writing is somewhat confusing. It would have been funny that at the end of the fanfic it was all a nightmare that Rainbow can't remember (and there the title of forget it). But I'm sure you can improve in the future.

BrushPrism