A stallion lives in the side of a mountain in a flooded world
This story was written for the A Thousand Words Contest.
Funny? Maybe. Introspective? Quite Possibly. Words? Yes.
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Interesting story. Might be better with the why or how he got there but definitely interesting.
Piscivorous ponies.
Interesting mood piece. Imagine such a lonely life, where time only brushes against you like a breeze. Where even the only meaning left for you, the mining of the crystals, is taken away.
Curious. Not sure what to make of this, much like both the stallion and the narrator. One note, though:
Between that and the all-fish diet, this does feel barely pony related. Still, thank you for it and best of luck in the judging.
oof, i hope that stormy isn't seen too often, then! and already a very lonely atmosphere here
a neat detail! unicorn horns being repurposed after the magic is gone, and this repurposing just feeling very wrong and sad and contrary to the spirit of the world that came before is always really cool
and oof, that just raises further questions! memories of a world lost? is this a stallion that we know? my habit of not checking the tags pays off in heightening the tension of this story!
the Crystal Empire, nice!
and oof, such a bleak fate for the stallion that is surely either Sunburst or Shining Armor. tho now i do wonder where the power for these appliances are coming from
oof, love how this was rendered. very haunting!
and oof! i mean, if anynarrator would be an unreliable one, it would be this one!
there's something neat about this, being trapped alone in an absurdly postapocalyptic world, haunted by fragments of memories, with no past and no future and barely a present. very sad and grim indeed. thank you for it!