First Blood: Kill to Save Lives

by Kitsune_Kenshi

Sequel suggestions

If you guys have any suggestions for the sequel of First Blood: Kill to Save Lives, type it in the comments below, appreciate your helps, thank you!

Comments

[shining paladin]

stories from ww2 veterans talking to new generation of soldiers

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10558813
Sure. Or... How about like veterans in service and ww2 veterans talking to teenagers that's in the Navy Academy?

[shining paladin]

10558818
yeah all two can work

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10558785
Well... His mother is furious because he killed two guys in a row, I doubt any parents won't get mad at that.

[OP Omni God-Emperor Doom]

10558838

One. Their a Criminal Gang. Two. They TRIED to hurt and rape his Sister, and beat him up. It was Self Defense, and the RIGHT thing to protect his sister and himself.

[XxRaptorxX]

Yess....you made a sequel, I haven’t read it yet cuz it’s like midnight here again (time flies fast now for me), but I will read it sometime tomorrow and tell you what I think here. I am unsure, only based on the few comments, what this story is like, but then again I haven’t read the description or story yet so, I cant judge a book by its cover. Hope the sequels good!

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10559012
Yeah I know, I wanted to make Trident's past more interesting.

[OP Omni God-Emperor Doom]

10559034

Alright I guess. I just don't like Trident getting punished for DEFENDING himself and his sister. And got rid of some Bad Ponies.

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10559045
I agree with you my friend, yes, sometimes life isn't fair.

[XxRaptorxX]

10558838
Hmmm, but the killing was to save his own kin and family. Idk, I don’t often read stories about this so I don’t know the choices people make in these stories. I like the story so far. There are some spelling mistakes like some “least” should be less and I think in the beginning you use “immediately” a little too much, but this is better than last story. I don’t really think there are drastic tense changes which is good. I’ll critique more later, I gotta go. Good story overall!

[XxRaptorxX]

10559738
Ok I’ll check it out in a sec

Still some spelling mistakes
Like hesitated instead of hesitate
And you wrote like

It Tok then

It should be “It took them”
I like you’re change of it, it feels more natural now.

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10559969
Alrighty, thanks for the check.

[XxRaptorxX]

10559988
You’re welcome!

[Kitsune_Kenshi]

10597159
Welp, that's what a soldier's job is during real life combat situation