Soundtrack: http://soundcloud.com/deloreandudetommy/the-machine
A first-person story involving a human (you) entering Equestria and exploring the surrounding landscape, not realizing that you're in the world of My Little Pony (the year the human world is in is 2047, FIM hasn't been on TV in decades). As you explore the world, it eventually dawns on you where you are. As you explore further, you meet other ponies and learn about your new surroundings, friends and the world of Equestria while trying to decipher what everybody (everypony?) is saying. Later on, you find out that you might not be as alone in this world as you initially thought.
Chapters (8)
I cant wait to read this your the best im also woorking on a second fanfic called rainbow dash is bored im still woorking on it cant wait for your
"welcome to the HEV mark V" quote from half life (one of the best games ever to be made. And you just took it to HEV 7(Hazardous Environment mark VII)
That was great. The chapters were a little short though, but whatever. Also im hoping for an explanation for how Pinkie knows what the telekenisis module was.
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*Gasp* Maybe shes a human from the future when the public transdimensional portals are made, and she's just chillin'
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Yeah, I've always had trouble writing a lot per chapter (I guess I have the same problem Dan Brown has where each chapter is barely even a page long).
Also, I figured Pinkie would know what a telekinesis module is because she knew what Parasprites were and how to get rid of them even though literally nobody else did. So basically it's sort of a reference to that. She could also just be really well traveled and seen it in another part of Equestria that is more technologically advanced (this story is set up so that Equestria is in the exact same time period it's in during the show even though the human world is in 2047, but we do see that Ponyville isn't the most technologically advanced of places in the show compared to other places like Manehattan for example).
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Actually, when I imagined the hazard suit I actually was thinking it would look a lot like the HEV suit painted jet black with the helmet (I think you see the HEV suit's helmet in Half-Life 2: Deathmatch, but I'm not sure).
i give u three scootaloos out of five
Aww good job i loved this it was very nice you did a great job!!
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Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it.
Uh landing on Jupiter?
1. Jupiter is a gas giant. There is nothing to land on except the ultra hot core.
2. The gravity would be so intense you would probably die withing minutes.
Sorry. I do like where this story is going so far though.
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I can't believe I didn't realize that. I think I'll change it to Venus, since Venus poses far more challenges than Mars while still remaining feasible since it has a stronger gravitational field and a far higher surface temperature.
I'm glad you like the story though.
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Again, sorry for pointing it out, and thank you.
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It's okay, it makes more sense now anyway. I like to make my stories as realistic and physically possible as possible.
Besides, it's just a small detail that doesn't really have any effect on the story anyway.
FLUTTER SHY!!! YEAH! FLUTUH SHY FTW!!!!!!
sooo your telling me that he goes into another universe and he gets changed into a horse then sees a city and decides hey i should go walk right into there with no knowledge of my surroundings... Yeah Right i call bull on this
my HEAD AHHHH THE LOGIC IT HURTS ME WHAT IS NERO THINKING