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YourUncleFuncle


Formerly known as YourUncleFuncle

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Applejack suffers from epilepsy, meaning that she suffers from periodic seizures. Doesn't seem that bad, right? Well, to her that means weakness, and she refuses to show weakness, no matter the cost, even if she pushes the boundaries of her own element.

Super big thanks to MegaCartmanX and Rainy Daze for proofreading for me.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 7 )

Not bad at all. Needs a bit of polish and you could expand the ending just a bit, but a solid work nonetheless.

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Yeah it’s not a work of perfection, but I do think it’s a step up in quality. Thanks for the feedback!

Oh wow... I've had stuff similar happen to me, but I don't have epilepsy, or ever had a seizure since. I just probably had a faintijng episode or something and it's freaking terrifying.

Also, there's just a few errors here and there with punctuation. Overall, great story.

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Thanks a ton, and also thanks for telling me about the punctuation, I'll try harder on future stories.

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It's alright. It wasn't too much of a distraction from the main message of the story, so overall, I thought it was amazing.

This was a great read. I've had epilepsy for a few years, and I really appreciated the clear work put into this, thanks 98377462614 / 10

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I don’t know why the random number, but thanks :rainbowlaugh:. I’m glad that you think it was well done, and I really hope your condition doesn’t interfere with you being happy. :twilightsmile:

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