Formerly known as YourUncleFuncle
Twilight Sparkle picks out a Romance Novel to read on Random Book Day and ends up loving it. But afterwards it seems that everypony suddenly falls head over hooves in love with her. This won’t end well...
Collaboration with Trixie Lunamoon 13, an awesome partner and an amazing writer. Without them this story wouldn’t be as great as it is.
While you’re at it, please check out the amazing prequel she wrote: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/473902/before-the-problem
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interesting start
I'm loving this so far! A fun and interesting plot, indeed. Very well written. Tracking <3
Hmmm... This'll be interesting.
H. H. Holmes, really? If you're trying to foreshadow someone sinister at the end that might be a little too direct. It makes me curious nonetheless. Two small, possible, nitpicks. I think you might have meant etched, not sketched with determination. And Twilight is not a unicorn, she only use to be. Unless I missed some context as to that being part of the story. That being said, that was a perfect cliff hanger ending. It builds prefect intrigue based on what we know had happened and might be happening soon. To steal a phrase. "...beautiful."
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Good catch! I just said H.H. Holmes because I thought it would be a cool Easter Egg, nothing more, but I’m surprised someone found it. Your right about the unicorn thing, that’s my bad and I’ll fix it, and I honestly don’t know the difference between the etched and sketched so I’ll leave it for now. Thanks for reading and for the comment!
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Yeah, sorry it’s coming a little later, it’s my fault. It will be out soon, though, so don’t worry.
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hey! Not your fault mate! We got dis!
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Eeyup
While the last chapter did throw me off a bit, I still really liked this one. I'm always a sucker for love hypnotism hijinks, and I can really see a lot of likeable qualities in your writing. Can't wait for more!
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Honestly you should thank No Name 13 for the idea about hypnotism. It was the breakthrough this story needed while we were writing it, but as for this chapter, thanks! I really enjoyed writing it!
My initial reaction:
IT’S SHINING ARMOR OH CELESTIA NO
Although I am curious as to why Discord and Spike were unaffected. Did it only affect mares?
Uh.
Oh.
R U N .
no
no!
nonononononononononononononononono!
I CRAVE MORE!
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No Name and I are hopefully going to have more soon, but I think both of us are busy with other projects.
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Ah okay