One Changeling emperor attacks canterlot, to steal her daughters statue. Only to kidnap the princess and her friends. Separated by magic each of them sent to Changelings hive.
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Yeah, you should’ve.
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sorry
As much as I want to argue about Twilight’s plan to save Thorax and the reform changelings. You showed a Changeling Queen feeds on greed, perhaps one Changeling Queen might feed on Hate that will use as proof that its the Twilight’s true feelings Chrysalis and say that before the Changelings became Pony’s version of reform, she hated them when they attack Canterlot. The reason I said that is the before Thorax got all the Changelings into friendship.
I doubt the dead and the birthday thing.
I’m doubting the dead and concussion but all an all, this is a good chapter and Mandible countering Twilight’s reasons to save Thorax and the reform changelings. I still say that in order to save The Reform Changelings, Twilight must save Chrysalis whether she likes it or not.
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No yesterday was my birthday
Dead and kill are lies.
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Correct, here’s another one: a silver cup, mirroring on the water, what is it?
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Well congrats tomorrow is mine.
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Which of us was correct?
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happy birthday!
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you.
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Thought so.
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Thanks.
WOO-HOO!!! New chapter!
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Sorry I was edit the chapters and noticed it was out of order and I’m currently writing a new chapter.
I can see why Chrysalis is angry and separate herself from her family, she wants to be unique herself and independent with her hive but Thorax destroyed her chance for that. Twilight may try to save Chrysalis but she only doing it to save Thorax & the Reform Changelings only. If Twilight sacrifice Chrysalis for them, than she's no crueler than Chrysalis, Tirek & Cozy Glow all together
Twilight is trapped in a conundrum.
If Chrysalis is guilty, then the reform Changelings are put to death.
If Chrysalis is innocent, then the reform Changelings are reset back to their original forms with no memories of who they were.
If Twilight wants to save Chrysalis, she has to blame the reform Changelings for being too emotional and get imprisoned for a decade or more. They live but are imprisoned for their actions.
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Yea, I want twilight to hit wall, after wall until the answer comes. She will keep being pushed and when she finds a way out she will still question her morals.
Happy that this story isn't dead
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Thanks, there will a few new chamber before I go back to hibernation
I'm happy to see that you uploaded a new chapter. Also Twilight and her friends in complete shock that Thorax & every other Reform Changeling were feeding off of Friendship and the parasite thing is... kind of true. I mean I don't understand if they're sharing their love to feed themselves and others, are they slowly draining each other or constantly consuming backwash energy? Also I see Chrysalis' mother still loves her but Chrysalis is nearly having a mental breakdown.
That is the dark truth of Twilight's reason to save the Reform Changelings. She cares more about them than Chrysalis. I mean that kind of selfishness would have spread to not only her and her friends but every creature who believes friendship is magic
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So far the idea is that Thorax and Ocellus have been taking in friendship devotion
and spreading it around the hive. Because devotion is one of the most potent forms of love they’re A ok with this amount, they still didn’t they were taking in the magic of friendship though.
Originally I wanted twilight to request a trial by combat but that would have been out of character for twilight, since she is more of politician than a warrior. Then Starswirl would volunteer to fight and then Maxilla would jump at the chance ending with both wounded and unconscious.
No offense but that's true. I mean all the Changelings that reform did blame Chrysalis for her actions and the Storm King's army, Tempest and Grubber did change sides. I mean the changelings just shifted their actions to blame Chrysalis. Thorax may have refused but than all the hive except for him would be punished.
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Exactly! I mean seriously they just forgiven and say. “Oh we decided to change sides so there’s no blame on us lol.” No atleast those who replaced ponies should have been punished, like those who infiltrated palaces, they weren’t there to during spread love not war scene.
So... after all what Twilight has tried; she failed to save Thorax & the Reform Changelings. Oh well, you can't win every time. Also what formless said is true; No one is always Omniscient. Also
Harmonious must have no free will and want everything like it is. Reminds me of Breach of Generator Rex; the EVO girl who took an entire town and made it into her perfect playtown but if one think is smashed; she gets rid of it.
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Actually she did, the reformed changelings aren’t allowed to enter the other Changeling hive or even speak to them. So for them it’s the status quo.
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God generator Rex is so under rated! It’s awesome from the music to the creature designs, I miss it so much. The series finally with breach pulling Uno reverse card on Rex, by saving Van kleiss and the pack! My theory breach is a relative of Van Kleiss or her favorite “plaything” as she would say.
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So... The reform Changelings are forbidden from making friends with the other hives? Makes sense and a harsh blow to Twilight and the Magic of Friendship
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Exactly.
Sequel?
And also "Przewalski"
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Only if my submission gets approved.
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good.
And don't forget "Szczęście"