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ok, This is too funny!!!!!!! xD comedy is well done!!!!!!!!! 10/10 for comedy, for mystery it was pretty rough a bit. so I have to say mystery was at least a 7/10.
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Comedy isn't my strong suit, but I try!
10502323
I'm not pressuring you, but can you please leave a like?
The pacing needs a lot of work. It’s far too short to be an effective mystery story, sorry.
10502336
I wasn't exactly going for a mystery here. I put the tab because I incorporated some small elements of the mystery genre.
10502343
I still love the comedy though... it's almost like this
10502368
I guess you're right. That video might not have been the inspiration, but I still got a good laugh.
10502374
you should get rid of thriller tag and put comedy instead.
10502383
Good idea!
Parts were funny. Comedy definitely works better than thriller as most/nearly all emoting feels incredibly forced.
favorite line...
10502754
Thanks for the positive feedback!
Watched the 100 man episode...
Why do the bodies appear half gone? Are the imposters eldritch abominations that was eating the missing half? Why can't they eat the remaining half? Are they instead keeping them as trophies? A lot of fan art depicts a knife... why can't the knife cut through that one bone? Clearly the crew is not human either so bone density might be a factor there...
Likes and dislikes appear neck in neck...
10502895
Honestly, I don't know why the corpses are only the bottom half of the body.
10502323
I've read worse, so... Sigh
I'm genuinely upset this wasn't better done.
10503350
well, that may be perhaps so in some cases... but it's still good at the 1k on dot line... still the comedy is still good to have. + spike and rarity ship... I'm guessing why he left the two alive. On 1k... it's still impressive.
10503466
Really? Wow.
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I can spin any tale in as less as 1,000 words. Also, you're both right and wrong about why I kept Spike and Rarity alive. They are in love, yes, but in Among Us, it's best to stick with others so they can give you an alibi. Just make sure you're not with an imposter.