• Published 12th Sep 2020
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Elements of Harmony: Divine Grace Sunshine - Hydreigon_Omega



After Escanor's "death" after the battle against the Demon king. He wakes up to find himself in a land of talking ponies. Soon he meets the royal sister, Celestia and Luna. But he might not be the only one from his world to come here after death.

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Chapter 3 - unfinished

In Tartarus, Galand was eating some souls of other creatures trapped in tartarus.

"Why are you eating so many souls?" Cozy glow asked

"I certainty find them quite delectable," King sombra said after trying a soul.

"They are a way to restore energy," Galand said, "Being dead really takes the energy out of you."

Moments later, Chrysalis returned and removed her transformation.

"I have the information on the creature." Chrysalis said, "I don't think he is anything to worry about."

"I would still like to hear what you have." Galand said.

"Appently his name is Escanor." Galand went from his happy masochistic smile, to a face full of fear.

"Is something wrong Galand." Cozy glow asked.

Galand was starting to quiver, while holding himself up with his weapon. "If this is the same Escanor that I remember," Galand said, "He turned my commandment against me, despite being arrogant and prideful, he has the power to back it up."

"He looks like a twig," Chrysalis said, "How can he hold much power, not to mention he seemed quite timid."

"That is just a mask of some kind," Galand said quivering, "When he reveals his real power, Run."

"So when do we attack?" Cozy glow asked, Really wanting to get revenge on Twilight.

"If we were to attack," Galand said, starting to regain his composure. "It would be at night, But none of us are strong enough to survive if they manage to hold out until day." Galand said, "we would be good as dead."

"How about we do like a warm up." Sombra suggested, "If we go north we will find the crystal empire."

Galand looked at King Sombra trying to figure out how serious he is.

"Yes." Chrysalis said, "Sombra and I do have some unfinished business to with the princess their and her husband."

"I only promised that I would help over through the sister." Galand said, "We won't be going"

"Darn," Chryslais said with actually disappointment in her voice, "I wanted to try the new tavern while we were their. I heard they had some good wine."

If Galand had an ear, it would have twitched. "On second thought," He started, "Why don't we go their," he said as he started to push the three to the outside. "We got places to go. And pony to kill."

"What has gotten into him?" Cozy glow asked

"I haven't a clue." Chrysalis said

Author's Note:

Should I continue with the demonic four, (Yes that is what I'll be calling them) or should I go back towards the main story, which is Ecanor and the others

Comments ( 4 )

Why did you cancel it

10459465
Didn’t see any point in it, It also needed a rewrite.

10460875
If you didn't see a point to it, than why are you rewriting it?

10724275
I didn't see a point in continuing this story line, I rewrote it to make better to read and so more people would read it.

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