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Transported as a child into Equestria max is adopted by none other than the storm king but all is not what it seems for max.

not fully cannon with the MLP timeline and quite a few characters will act slightly different than their counterparts but should be pretty close to the base of their character, also spike will be closer to a teen in later parts than a baby dragon

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 8 )

This seems interesting.

The author’s note was confusing to me.

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Ya I'll fix that missing a coma

10457536
Thanks trying to finish chapter 3 right now stuck on a part

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It’s not that, I’m just confused on what it means.

"I found them in the street of the town below old general. I have need of you to train them especially focus on this boy here." He pointed to Max "I have need of him at times for the project so make sure to keep him up with the other two.

Other two?

"Hmph it isn't anything that special kid." Tempest says dismissively before continuing her training with a slight smirk on her face.

Is this tempest nicer?

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Have him keep up with Tempest and Capper since he's going to be doing things with the Storm King as well.

and this was more of her being praised for her skill early on she's pretty young at this point like Capper is and I viewed Tempest as not really finding a place in life so she became jaded still haven't completely flushed out how she's going to act but it will be nicer than in the movie.

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