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Maud Pie investigates rumors surrounding the mysterious entity known as Lord DeFace, who supposedly lives in the basement of the Canterlot Theater, along with his unlikely friend, Idol Hooves.

Recursive-fic AU Oneshot of The Changeling of the Guard by vdrake77. Title comes from a popular public domain story. Heavily inspired ALW’s Phantom of the Opera.

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Comments ( 8 )

This was a great read and loving the concept. I did get a bit lost in a few places trying to piece together what was going on, but it was steal a nice concept.

Nice twist. Took me a while to figure out what was going on but as alternate history goes, this could be fun. The story need a bit of work to be more fluid. Some more description of the scenes could be good too.

Comment posted by ShayMcSudonim deleted Sep 17th, 2020

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Yeah, I should probably edit for clarity at some point, but the lazy part of me is just like, 'you put a mystery tag on the story, you're fine.'

I was trying to do a structural parody of Jekyll and Hyde, if it helps, but I'm pretty sure that I overestimated the number of people who've read that story. Jekyll and Hyde is pretty dry, so I was like, 'I'll make the story more exciting!' and then forgot that I also needed to make things make sense.

Anyway, thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed the story! ^_^

Well this was fun! Had us revising the situation each beat of the story until the end!

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Thank you!

I wrote this to vent pandemic stress, so I'm honestly surprised it turned out even semi-comprehensible. Glad you enjoyed it! : D

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Yeah, we have an embarrassingly large backlog of fics to get through.

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