YAY NEW CHAPTER!!!
It was beutiful, It was cute the part when fluttershy sleep in discord.
And the cute lovemaking was the best.
Favorite chapter yet.

It's so sweet. Good job

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I'll cede you the point* and quibble you a detail: a nemesis is an avenger of wrongs, not merely a foe. Now, the only reason I trouble to argue such a common mistake is that now I want to see a fic where Dissy is a literal nemesis to avenge her past sins. That concept wont fit into my head cannon but it sure sounds like fun! DO you feel up to the challenge?

*that H'reince didn't specifically know where the deed would be done

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Glad you’re having fun quibbling. But as the author, I’m telling you Celestia did not somehow predict they would end up having sex at the gala. They themselves didn’t know that at that point in the story.

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Oh! Coolbeans, thank you so much!

I read it and it was very nice and helpful! I’m glad you liked it