Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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aaaand Discord comes knocking
So this tree of harmony has a different origin then
Summer needs to fucking change,it's not kindness but stupidity and nativity, even others are sick of it.
Her parents were killed ,a literal Bruce Wayne material but noo
I am very interested in what kind of mark Summer would get, since we already know Celestia's and Luna's. It would be really helpful if she has something that can bring balance between her siblings.
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Wow... this is the exact reason why I hate humanity sometimes. It's always "Get the pitchforks out! VENGEANCE!" and I really hope at some point humanity grows out of it. Blood for blood leads only to more hatred and Summer isn't the type to continue that cycle (at least not for things that weren't intentional. How could Platinum have known her mother would die?). I'm not saying what Princess Bitchface did was right, but she will get her just punishment eventually and Summer will be the first in line for that (just not for the reasons that led to her mother's death).
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I know I brought this up already at some point, but does no one see the Cutie Marks in the cover art? xD
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I had a feeling it might be the case, but again, I thought it would be unfair for Luna that she get something different from her siblings.
Discord has entered the chat
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Well then good job hypocrite , you made Luna and Celestia act in this "human" way
Ponies act more human that MC itself.
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Just because I hate that behavior doesn't mean I won't use it for story purposes. I'm a human, too, after all. I have those little dark thoughts all the time, but I wouldn't ever act on them. Characters and people in real life are flawed by their very nature, I won't deny that. But there are people that are that forgiving if only to set a better example. So please, don't think Summer is stupid only because of that.
Heck, I won't even deny that Summer is stupid a lot of times, she kinda is an idiot from time to time, but that doesn't mean her viewpoint isn't justified. I'm sorry that you think she must go around bringing vengeance because she shares one single similarity with friggin' Batman, but that won't make her Batmare or whatever just for the sake of it. There are going to be times where even Summer will act cruel, but she has her special reasons for that (all of them being her twin). One sure way to get Summer of all ponies to be cruel is to go after her wife and that is one thing that she won't ever forgive.
So, yeah... went on a tangent there, hope it clarifies a few things.
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By Batman thing, I meant that she will become cold in a way to strangers and enemies.
And that she would enact vengeance but not with killing but by bringing their influence and empire down and bringing them to justice , like Batman but without running around in the costume.
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Dear, I know what you meant... But comparing her to other characters isn't going to work in the way you want me to make it work. Believe me, Batman might be tame in comparison at times with some of the things Summer and Co. will get up to because of misguided beliefs. Heck, if you read through the source material for this and the next two chapters (they are the same one if you need to know), you will see that ponies have seriously screwed up morals. I really don't want to spoiler anything in the comments, so you will have to take my word for it. Suffice to say, Summer is going to be one of the biggest hypocrites ever about kindness and generosity >.> (There are going to be reasons for that and even those will be quite hypocritical for Summer and Co. They aren't perfect and I never claimed them to be so, but they will still strive to be the best they could)
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If she will screw up so badly, will Summer become Daybreaker?
Or just cut ties with sisters?
She then could be banished or just normally leave, before Nigtmare Moon happens.Magically or by normal means, like out of country to create her own Empire. With her ideas, beliefs she learned, etc
Then she can be brought back when show begins as empress(in Daybreaker form or her normal one) of a far away giant empire or something like that, when she learns that 3 new alicorns appeared.
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Not going to spoiler, dear. ;)
Suffice to say, so far no one has even come close to guessing as to what happens during the thousand-year gap.
Oh no...
The Murphy has been doubled!
Hope you make more!
Good Luck!
If this becomes true... then oh dear lord, Twilight was reading through that
Im really, really enjoying this. Im curious how you continue the story after the castle is built. I mean you have options. Discord, sombra, stigian's banishment, the pillars... you certainly have options. I look forward to more.
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"Princess Celestia, these anatomical diagrams and treatises are amazing in their accuracy and level of detail. Why did you have so many of them, though?"
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I'm glad you guys like the idea so much. To be honest, as I thought of the idea, I couldn't just not put it in the chapter because it fits Tia's character in this story so much. I couldn't stop grinning like a lunatic as I wrote that part ;D
Oh you poor sweet Summer child...
I don't remember its title, but I once found a fanfic where somepony points out the jokes in the city names to Celestia, and twilight start saying that the princess wouldn't do that.
Celestia (of course) immediately reveals that she did do it, and Twilight bluesceens for several minutes.
You aren't as subtle as you think, but it took me longer then I'd like to work it out.
This is such a delightful story, I can’t wait to read more! I wish you luck in writing it!
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The sad thing is, I never claimed to be subtle. Heck, I thought I was being blatantly obvious, even.
If I may ask, what did you figure out? :)
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the daughters
"Let’s just hope nothing bad happens to the ponies working with us over the coming weeks"
you done goofed
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Im going to take a wild guess and say that Discord will freeze Summer along with him as a parting gift. Losing Summer, who acted as the buffer between Celestia and Luna, will eventually cause them to begin to argue until Luna cracks and becomes Nightmare Moon.
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Good try, but I still won't spoiler anything ;)
Right?! ;-;
Puns are awesome! Even the punintentional ones. :D
"The most dangerous creation of any society is the man who has nothing to lose." - James A. Baldwin
Damn... That one hell of a story! I wonder how Discord will effect it... Is he a outside force i wonder? Or perhaps a silent puppet master? I personaly see him as a teacher with a harsh love approach like:
- Your nation rare materials are almost used up?
Simple, i change the upper layers with the lower but destroy the stability of your buildings etc.
- Your fighting eatch other? Lets see if you come to your sences if your have to fight together to survive one mighty opponent. Conflict teaches teamwork? :
Also stagnation is death... Every 2 or so centuries a little help is needed for keeping em from getting to growing complacent.
Of f-king course the instant I got too preoccupied to read this story since chapter 3, this story took a swan dive into a cesspool. I can tolerate the incest, gender identity issues, whatever, but this?
Is 'preaching off the high horse' an Teenager thing or a Westerner thing? Because I, for the life of me, couldn't comprehend the sheer stupidity Summer is displaying here.
I'm not saying that I condemned her indifference in regards to the demise of her mother dearest, but what really ticked me off here is the way she keeps parroting those damn lines like an emotionless blob of meat sack. Supposedly, she used to be a grown human adult - a reason why she has these relatively-alien-to-ponies concepts of morals, rights, freedom, whatever good vibes there was. I can understood her decision to forgive.
What I don't understand is the way she willingly, knowingly, blindly-trustingly let other ponies step on her family, and then brush it off like nothing happened. Don't give me that BS about how she forgave and trust them because the actions of the few shouldn't condemn the rest, I'm talking about the ponies that actually deserved what's coming for them. Ponies with neon signs declaring "TRASH", Ponies that might have wanted them DEAD for all she might know yet she trusted the words of a wrinkly old stranger whom she had never heard of or meet before - brushing off the concerns of her 'trusted and beloved' family.
How old was she before she died? Certainly doesn't feel like she had been a 30-ish married man with two children.
I really don't like to do this, but seeing that the whole argument is held in another chapter, please read that before condemning the whole story: Link. If it really is that much of a problem after knowing more about the background of... well... that, then I don't fault you, dear reader, for leaving a dislike based on this chapter's faults. I'm not a professional author, keep that in mind.
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Indeed. Platinum would have to be used until her very life force was used up. Justice for all her murders on her Authority!
I just realized something 3 ponies 3 alicorns 3 tribes
Pffffff well that was unexpected!!
Guardians of the Galaxy!!!
I'd put in a time dilation spell that would automatically reverse time till the jar was full of cookies again
Even my own bleeding heart can go so far till I'm calling for blood
That's because every other unicorn is drained of magic
First time you've ever mentioned a hammer space
Ooo yes. Secret paggases galore. Have one for celestia so she can get her cake fix directly from the kitchen lol
I'm surprised they haven't figured out to use their magic on the celestial orbs in the sky yet
In other words: they take -and give- a lickin' and it's hard to make 'em stop tickin'.
Perhaps the symptom of Rincewind Arcology syndrome?
For those who don't know, the tl;dr of that one is that unicorns - and by extension, alicorns - like height. Twilight and Rarity (presumably) sleep on top floors of their homes, the princesses - in Canon - have a home on top of a mountain, Sombra kept the crystal heart in the highest chamber of the tallest tower, etc etc. So if there were anywhere that a unicorn - or alicorn - would feel safe, it would be somewhere up high.
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That's an argument I would make with pegasi, actually. Sombra keeping the heart somewhere where no earthpony or crystal pony could get to would actually make more sense than having an inherent feeling of safety the further up he goes. Which still doesn't explain Canterlot perfectly, but eh. *shrug*
I wonder if the Three Sisters would harbour some bias towards Platinum(yeah, ain't calling her a princess) when it became a traditional Hearthswarming Play. Say, make Platinum a whiney character or very stuck up or both.
i'm gonna dropped it here. the protagonist is like combination between celestia's unhinged generosity none stop blabbing mouth.
just no
Best idea they can have... Flushing toilets!
Three thing everyone need is to drunk, eat and -it out. The flush toilet was one of the most important inventions everrr!