Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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0que capítulo me sorprende la calidad de esta historia espero que sigas subiendo este tipo de contenido, con abrazos y besos me despido ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
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Wow, a chapter a day early. Let's see what hardships they have to deal with next.
here is a tarrefing thought:
Hope turns in to Chrysalis.
hmmm... here I would make a theory that princess Cadence is Amore Reincarnated, but since you seem to be following the comics, I must assume that Amore is still alive
Naked mole apes, even. Always with the diggy digging of holes to “extract resources” and “get rich,” or even just as a place to hide away...
No, Sombra, they’re not after Grogar today. The whole army they brought... it’s all for you!
Either “immune to failure” or just infallible.
Um, Starswirl? I think your last time spell landed a little... off. There was a ten year timeskip, according to how long this chapter says Luna’s been refusing to talk to the others. That makes her twenty-six, and the others older. Even without the extra 6 years before she died, or the decades of life they all lived Before Ponyfication, since you don’t know about those. But precision is an important part of being a sagacious old coot, you sagacious old coot!
It could be worse, Lulu. At least her name is Daybreaker in this ‘verse, and not Molestia.
I mean, you’re not wrong, but when one thinks of how difficult it is to find one lifelong partner... forget about a whole herd of ‘em! That just takes the type of luck introverts like me don’t have it in them to create.
Interesting, now summer is the one who was touched by the darkness instead of Luna. Like sombra said, a door opened...
I'm surprised I haven't been called stuff for the naughty scene in this chapter. Did I corrupt you guys with things I shouldn't have? xD I would have thought that a lot more people would have been mad at me for those kinda things (first and foremost the incest thing between Summer and Tia)
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Thank you, dear. I hope I won't ever disappoint you, in that case. :3
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I toyed with the idea of changing the chapter uploads to Saturdays, instead, but I'm still torn regarding that. It depends on which day would be more convenient for you guys.
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It would be a terrifying thought, indeed. The question, on the other hand, is 'How would it happen?'. I mean, Radiant Hope is a crystal pony and not exactly 'fleshy'...
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Yeah, I entertained the idea of Amore reincarnating into all kinds of canon ponies in "modern" Equestria and never actually gave it serious thought. I dunno if she ever got revived in the comics, I haven't read every comic (still on my list to do if I ever get over my laziness >.>), so I'm open to suggestions in that regard. One thing I will say is that Summer briefly entertains that idea once she comes across Cadance, but I'm still on the fence about whether or not I want to change that bit...
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That... is a disturbing image to imagine.
I don't quite remember where I got that title for Sombra (maybe it was the comics, I would have to look that up), but I thought: "Hey, Sombra is a kinda conceited and (somewhat?) narcisstic pony, he would be the type to declare himself the King of all Monsters even if it isn't actually true..." and just went with it. It also fits with the whole interaction he had with 'fake' Grogar in the show xD
This just made it into the story after I read the 'Legend of Magic' comics as I was writing this during a later chapter or so and I thought: "Damn, that kinda fits with their immature behavior most of the time (whether it is during the actual chapters or 'behind the scenes') and it fits with Starswirl's 'I know better' view of things, so why not add it in?" From there, it sort of spiraled out of control and actually developed into a minor(?) plot point.
Somehow I got the feeling Daybreaker would be way worse than Molestia... like, I dunno, way worse.
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I suppose they are all touched by 'darkness', just as much as they are touched by 'light'. One has to wonder whether the light is as innocuous as everyone assumes *looks at World of Warcraft with a deathglare...*
Don't trust the light and/or darkness.
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Ok, well either weekend day would work for me.
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you shoud have seen that one coming.
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Yeah, perhaps. Also, applying that video to the last chapter... damn...
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yeah....
it is a vary usefull clip
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Most peoples historically have been flexible about incest, whether they’d admit it or not. Especially for the ruling classes. *cough* Habsburg *cough*
I figure, if it’s truly consensual and not leading to recessively inbred offspring with disabling genetic problems (talk about a born victim...) then to each their own. I couldn’t think of my siblings that way, but if someone can, and it harms none, do what thou wilt.
Even in today’s civilization, hardly anybody has a problem with line breeding animals for “favorable” traits. Though the judgement of what is “favorable” is often suspect, when you consider dogs like pugs or overbred racehorses with toothpick legs. If it’s just for recreation, well, Isaac Asimov himself included that as a facet of Spacer social customs, so who am I to look down on it in appearing in someone else’s fiction?
I was more concerned at the rape warning you posted because I was worried Lulu was gonna get raped, with some “for her own good” rationalization. That would have killed the story for me.
Tia liking it “rough” even if
SummerFallen Star didn’t exactly give her a chance to say yea or nay is actually fairly tame by comparison. I imagine Summer actually feels much worse about it than Tia, going forwards.Actually, if Tia doesn’t make jokes about Summer rutting her during a battle with ancient evil for the next few thousand years, I’d be disappointed.
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In the comics... nope ive not read the past 3 months of the comics but, as far as i know, Sombra and hope wanders off into the sunset with that as his goal, until season 10 made the whole comic arc non-canon(RIP my second favorite arc)
You know, I was thinking about it, and I believe Summer should be the day sky.
That way, Celestia would always be in her!
HUEHUEHUEHUE-
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I don't think I would think of my siblings in that way, either. I mean, as a little child I had an immature crush on my sister only because she and my brother were kinda... my only friends for a very long time, but eh. I'm more jelly of my brother for finding a girlfriend before me, but that's an entirely different matter >.>
Yeah, no. Summer wouldn't ever do that to Lulu and Tia is kinda a special case that has a fetish for every demented fetish she could possibly entertain. I won't ever actually write any of that stuff out and at most only mention it like "Yeah, she has that fetish" and leave it at that. Suffice to say, there is a (really bad) reason for why she enjoys that stuff and it always makes me want to cry that I gave her such a *fluffy bunnies* backstory in order to make it a somewhat believable explanation why she acts the way she does. All I will say about that is that it also explains why they grew up in an orphanage, instead.
You have no idea. One has to wonder why Tia still manages to get her to go along with most of her fetishes... >.>
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That... makes weirdly sense for Tia. Damn it. I can't un-think it now, what have you done to me?! xD
Fixed that. I wasn't aware you couldn't write it like that. One never stops learning. :)
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They did? D: How dare they?! >:(
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I have no words for that. No words...
I see what you did there
That's crack number 1
Huh, I always thought Luna would be the one with loyalty
Welcome to foreshadowing 101. Here we see what will become of a fate in twisted irony as one of their certain closest members experience said punishment
Welcome to foreshadowing 102 where the author has taken the liberty to allude to a future event with an obvious *hint hint wink wink nudge nudge*
I'm sad because I do this unironically to my friends to tease them. Oh their faces are worth it~
Ahh The Observer is here but why indeed and what might be his name.
So we know what happened in the great war and why Summer hates humans so much despite holding on to her humanity. Can't say I disagree with her. I have different beliefs on what humans and humanity is and I belief Summer holds to that rationale even if she doesn't realise it.
Reuniting with Luna after 10 years,. That's a hefty timeskip. Figured it is the best way to age up Sombra while denoting that not much has changed. What happens to Radiant Hope? Did she vanish along with all other crystal ponies? Is she still in Eqeustria waiting, watching,...... plotting? Nobody knows but what is known is that she is still relevant and we have to find out why.
In terms of theories, I have no theories. I've shelved the 1000 year timeskip for now to return to it later. We are introduced to the darker alter ego of the trio and they made peace with em. Summer has certainly figured out the spell needed to summon her 'equipment'. Celestia has new toy and ideas to play with and Luna has joined the herd what could be more satisfying.
The crossovers that the author is using is RWBY and Fringe. For now anyway. They might add more but for now it's just those two. Many guesses can be made to why the Observers are present, are they the advance pony race from the future? (that's a yes BTW). But why are they there? What is there to see. The funeral? Why aren't they present during the trios inauguration? Are they related to the crystal empire or the brethren Sombra has mentioned?
That's all for now. Sorry for being late with this I've been trying to digest this for some time. Anyways, toodles!
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There must be a reason for that, no? ;)
I dunno... I have a feeling they are named after the twelve months of the year...
What, indeed... Surely no one could ever guess that, right? It would be really obvious if I were to use the comics, wouldn't it? Why, it would almost be too obvious...
That is the question, isn't it? Are they benevolent or do they have more... sinister... plans? Or are they simply neutral? So many questions, no answers...
If you could witness history in the making, what would you do? What would you observe? What possible plans could you make to... I dunno... ensure history plays out in the way that it needs to play out?
But... are you sure they weren't observed on the day of their coronation? Maybe Summer and Co. had encountered them before? After all... Summer had this little feeling about him...
Lastly, with the wise words of Andy Price, a very talented comic artist, have any of you...
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Aww shucks I don't read the comics. It's gonna be forever dark for me until I read what happens next
It can't be. September? Hah! Im not actually sure. September sure is the most featured one though (in the show i mean)
I thought Luna would take loyalty and laughter with her talent in flying and constantly noted sense of humour and Tia would take Magic and honesty for her talent in magic and her honesty towards her desires.
Uhh woops missed that soz
You didn't corrupt us we were already Abyss creatures when we found you.
I wanna see Starswirl be like Socrates criticising Plato's(his own student) generation for 'destroying the value of you elders and civilisation' by writing stuff down on paper and not memorising it like a true philosopher would. (yes the older generation has been complaining about the younger generation for forever. The peak of humankind is the hunter gatherers that kill mammoths and cave bears and domesticated wolves)
I dunno Fey I kind of relate to this Day breaker. I kinda like her~(for reasons that are obviously obvious)
So are Summer and co from an alternate Earth or is Summer losing her grasp on human history and mixing it with some work of fiction that I'm unfamiliar with?
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I... I would have thought that by now it would have been pretty obvious Summer's Earth isn't our Earth. o.O
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To memory the only thing prior to this that could hint to their Earth being different from ours is the fact that you called WW1 the World War and WW2 the Great War which isn't that odd of a thing considering the fact that Irl some people call WW1 the Great War and WW2 the World War.
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Still, even if that's the case, I would have thought that one certain thing in the last chapter would have given enough hints regarding one fundamental difference to our Earth:
Aside from that,
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did manage to figure out the partial crossovers that I used to "create" Summer's universe. They aren't true crossovers, mind you, it's more like they heavily influenced Summer's universe, changing a few events in history here and there to reflect the origin universe and so on.
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I get what you're saying but while humans can't have actual red eyes there are some albeit rare conditions that can cause eyes to appear red and as for the green hair well the answer to that is dye. But anyways thanks for clarifying whether or not it was alt earth or summer losing it.
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No problem, I'm always happy to respond to comments, dear! I am aware of the eye-color thing (even though it isn't truly red if I'm not mistaken) and I have no idea when it started to get more common for people to dye their hair (in those colors, at least), but that wouldn't have been a thing when Summer & Co. were kids. I think.
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Hay, it’s your character that inspired the thought. So technically, you did it to yourself by doing it to me. Or something?
It just seemed too fitting for her; “Oh, I get carried away, dear? I’ll always remember the first time you made me your mare... you couldn’t even wait for the battle with Sombra to be over! Such impatience!”
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when is the next chapter coming out? i hope it comes out soon.
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Next Sunday, dear. So far, the schedule is every two weeks. Until I run out of chapters, that is... I have been a bit too lazy as of late and chapter 19 has been a major pain in my *fluffy bunnies* to write and I'm still nowhere near to finishing that chapter (it's probably way too long, already, but I'm reluctant to split it into multiple chapters). I shudder to think how long that chapter will take me to edit... >.>
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i hope your right.
It was not as dark as you noted. If you wanted dark, cutting the chapter into a two piece where she was turn into Fallen Star.
Fuck... Ten years jump? Wonder what happend to em and how mutch they grow & improve .
Bloody hell... When you have only bad choices and you have to accept that no matter the outcome you lose... indescriptionable misery...
The rape needs a skip area sign. This almost killed this amazing story. Pretty sure every dislike this story get is from the lack of that.
Magnificent lightside / darkside conversation
back
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Believe it or not, the majority of those downvotes were there before this chapter came out. Just look at the statistics and the release date of this chapter. As for the warning, I do at least expect people to take me seriously when I write it directly at the start of the chapter and be cautious from there. I know people don't like this and I certainly don't enjoy writing such things, but they do serve a purpose for the story. Everything, howsoever small as it may seem, has a thought behind it why I wrote it the way I did. That scene could be a lot worse than it actually is (like doing that to a stranger, for example ._.).
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Fixed. Thanks for pointing it out, that one escaped my notice even after re-reading for like ten times. :S
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I adjusted the warning in the author's note a bit because it kinda was a little too vague for this particular thing. I do agree that there should be sufficient warning about this, but I really hate to put in an 'indicator' in the middle of the story. It just feels wrong to disrupt the narration at any point, warranted as it might be.
Loved this chapter
Author's Note:
Reference: Fiendship is Magic - Sombra
WARNING: This chapter will get darker than usual and there is (consensual?) rape. Read with caution! I expect you to take this warning seriously, there won't be any indicators in the chapter itself. As soon as Summer sees her twin after a certain scene, be wary. Blame Tia. Or me. Frankly, I'm disgusted at myself for having written that part.
oh come on it cant be that bad I'm mean I have read this
Chapter Forty-Eight—Estrus - Diaries of a Madman - Fimfiction
and it wasn't TOO 'bad'
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Uh... right. That warning is going to stay there, though.
But Platinum was part of it... Who did you replace her with? If you erased Celestia than Platinum name most be erased as well...
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Duh. One thing that would get on Platinum's nerves the most is being forgotten. Aside from the whole Nightmare Dream thing, there is nothing left of her in the history books of Equestria. If Summer holds a grudge, she holds a grudge.
He was suppose to leave his only home and friend? To go were? To do what? Not to forget that he did get kinda tortured as we learned in the comics...
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Sooo It Commander Hurricane, Counselar Puddinghead and a mare lost to time?
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Well... Equestria would be one option. He could have gone with Radiant Hope instead of seeing her 'betray' him because she was asked if she wanted to study under the Princesses.
I don't quite understand what you are asking me here. If you think they went to the Empire with Tia, Lulu, and Sunny, then no. They aren't trapped in the Empire.
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More like how the story of heart warming will be with Platinum gone.
"There were ones upon a time a earthpony stallion name Puddinghead, a Pegasus stallion names Hurricane and a unicorn mare". Unless you want her offical name be 'Bitchface' Than again Diamond Dog burrow might take offense to that
Slender-
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Okay, was momentarily confused, but then realized you meant that as a reply to my other comment. Ah, well...
I suppose that's an accurate interpretation. I would have just said that they cut her out entirely, but then the whole unicorn vs. pegasus vs. earthpony thing wouldn't make as much sense. *shrug*
Uh... no. Wrong pony in a suit. :3
Exhibit A: MLP Comics - Observer
Exhibit B: FRINGE - September locked out from universe
Exhibit C: Comic Artist Andy Price - Fan of FRINGE
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The first one is not meant as a question of whether or not she felt attracted to her, but a statement. She knew she was attracted to her, so there's no need for the if. As for the second one, as far as I know, it is correct like it is, but I'll change it, anyway. *shrug*
Well, let's see how will the Royal Sisters handle Discord. If it's following the comics then Radiant Hope is living with the Umbras in the crystal although she must've been devastated to see Sombra like that. Anyway, speaking of Sombra, I wonder if there's gonna be the Reflections Arc in this fic. Well, for that to happen you're gonna need the Nightmare Moon fiasco to happen. Speaking of that, I really hope that the Summer Sun Celebration isn't named after Summer.
As always, a fun little chapter(I wouldn't call it little per se), we got to see the Royal Sisters' Dark sides.
The good thing having a connection to once dark side is noone can take advantage of it pulling it front and center. You'r story inspired one of my storys to give them activ control of theirs.