Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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Hmmm... I can see Luna's anger issue could easily lead to Nightmare Moon. Let's hope Twilight won't get this Celestia's kinkiness.
you know WW 1 was called the "great war" before WW 2 then they were just WW 1 & 2 but WW 1 is still referred to as the great war not WW 2
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Yes. But the Great War in this story isn't WW1 or WW2 on their Earth. If it hasn't been obvious by the character descriptions, their Earth is quite different than our Earth. ;)
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Aww, thank you, dear! :)
Yes, quite right with most of it. There are going to be heavy deviations from canon (I don't like just copy-pasting the show with just slight differences, so there is that). Let's just say that the start of 'season one' of MLP will be quite different. I won't spoiler anything and that will be the only hint I will give you guys. ;)
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it is a bit hared to read betwen the lines sometime, but I'm geting yujo senki wibes on thier great war.
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I have no idea what that is, dear. I'mma look that up, then :)
Edit: Oookay, then. I have no idea about how I should feel knowing about that anime/manga. I'm kinda fearful of giving it a try, to be honest.
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Ther is no romance in it if thats what your worid about.
And I'd recomend the manga if you want explinations to a lot of stuff,
and the anime for the action.
and I find it perticulary hulerius how much missreading is going on in the manga.
That was a nice chapter and perhaps even the start of darkness for our lunar Princess.
Just...can you lower the number of italics you use, please? It get a bit hard to read.
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Ah, no, I'm not worried about romance (otherwise I wouldn't be writing this, I am a bit of a pervert). I am more worried about the ruthless soldier part. I dunno, if it isn't me writing something like that, I can't get into it. I suppose I just don't feel comfortable with the idea other people's imagination can get so dark (I mean, it is a bit hypocritical of me because I can write such things without batting an eyelash, but if it is other people, I always get a queasy feeling). Whatever it is that has me thinking like that, I don't like it. That's probably the reason why I try my best to be as kind and understanding as I could possibly be. I'mma shut up now before I go on a longer tangent than needed. ;)
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Is it getting too much? I thought it was okay so far, I sort of read it and pay attention where Summer would put emphasis on her words and wrote that in italics.
I guess I could remove it and have the italics version available on google docs for those that enjoy it. I would hate for it to just go to waste. :S
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No, it's just that on this one, italics were everywhere.
Could be my phone tho.
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I don't know what to do, really. I mean, I already edited my chapters so much in order to include italics 'cause no one said anything about it. It wouldn't be that hard for me to remove every trace of it, but that would mean either have italics or don't have them at all. Should I make a poll to see what others think about this?
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Well, I decided to go through with the google docs thing. I suppose it was a bit much and looking at the later chapters... I kinda went even more crazy on them. >.>
So, yeah... the italics chapters can be found here from now on.
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Thank you for being understanding, and thank you for the story.
Cuz it's already good, and we haven't even yeeted Luna to the moon yet!
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As long as it is something that I can easily change, I'm not going to be like "Whyever should I change anything?"
Besides, I kinda had a feeling that it started to get too much. I compared one of my early chapters with the most recent ones and kinda had to admit... damn, that went overboard fast. ;)
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Sometime, overboard is just what you need.
Sometime, the water's just too cold.
ooh update!
Okay, I enjoy this story, but this chapter? I’m not even halfway through, and the extreme over-use of italics as emphasis is annoying me beyond measure. I would strongly recommend reading it out loud to yourself so you can hear just how crazy it is to have constant emphasis going on in every single paragraph.
Italic emphasis isn’t for every slightly stressed word. It’s to denote a more extreme emphasis. If Summer really talked like that, you would think she had a mental problem. And it’s not even just Summer!
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Already changed and addressed multiple times in the comments. I'll admit it was a bad decision on my part and maybe I'm dumb enough to make the italics version still available on google docs (made a blog regarding that). So, can we put this topic to rest?
(Reading it out loud, I do put emphasis on words, but I suppose I don't read it fast enough to notice such things. Do keep in mind I'm not a native English speaker, I might get confused by such things much more easily while actually speaking)
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I guess my browser still had the old version cached from when I loaded it earlier to read on my break.
Just keep in mind that it’s only for the really strong emphasis one might put on a word to really call attention to it, not the natural stresses and inflections that are a part of speaking normally, and you’ll be fine. I honestly didn’t think you weren’t a native English speaker, just someone who’d made an odd stylistic choice that... got really weird after a while.
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Understandable. Although, you might have seen from the earlier comments that I already changed it ~2 hours ago, so I was a little bit surprised to see someone commenting on it again. Maybe keep that in mind next time and see if it already has been addressed? :)
Well, I'm glad I can fool you people so easily if that is the case. I suppose most of that is because I edit the story so much, I haven't really gotten to continue writing on the latest chapter (partly because of me editing the story and because of writer's block).
I do appreciate the feedback, even though I have heard it about a dozen times now. :D
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I often don’t have cell signal reliably throughout the day, but yeah, I should have refreshed before commenting. You seem to check back more often than a lot of folks, too. Some authors wouldn’t have gotten around to looking at the comments yet, but you’re already on top of things. That’s actually pretty cool.
Just for fun, other common uses for italics in English writing are to italicize first person thoughts as opposed to quoted speech, italicizing “translated” passages a la anything supposedly written in the Old Tongue in the Wheel of Time series, or italicizing flashbacks/dream sequences/other “less real” passages, to differentiate them from the main text.
And what’s always been a little funny is that words in those passage that would be italicized for one of the other reasons actually go back to being normal text, again to keep them different and standing out.
It’s definitely an easy weapon for a writer to overuse, even on accident.
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Ah, well, I think I will just keep the story on fimfiction completely italics free and use google docs as my little playground to butcher the English language to my heart's content. I might never get used to the emphasis on speech in the English language (or any other one, for that matter). My mother tongue is pretty much a very monotone one that pretty much never gets any emphasis on words. One of my English teachers that taught in my previous school even said that native English speakers get slightly weirded out by how monotonous we speek in comparison to you guys. ;D
Hope she turns around
wow... this part really reminds me alot of another great fanfic called Teatime.
Are you referring to WWII as the Great War?
Another great chapter and oh so many new info to theorise on. I can't do it right now tho unfortunately. This is so far the worst 8 hours of the day with so many unlucky events happening one after another. Your chapter has provided respite but alas I fear the bad day will continue. I have to go break out some bad news. I hope you're having a great day as opposed to mine. I'll come up with theories later. See ya
Edit : just delivered the news and I felt so light. I'll get to the theories soon.
So after that encounter I'm betting a couple alicorns probably got at least a little satisfaction when Sombra ripped the tree a new one a few millennia later.
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Might have to read that at some point, thanks for the recommendation!
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Eh, no. It's not WW1 or WW2. Maybe I should have given that war a different name, now that I think about it, but I kinda wanted to make an obscure reference to a war that happened in a web-anime that Summer's old world is partially based on. I kinda hoped people would start to connect the dots a bit with which world this story is a partial crossover with, but apparently I'm not as obvious as I believed myself to be. >.>
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Oh, dear... I hope everything will be alright. I'm glad you see this little experiment of a story of mine as a respite, in that case. Still can't believe so many people like this. Can't wait to see your newest theories! ;)
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Sorry, it really hasn’t been that obvious for me. Maybe I’m just thick-skulled or something, my last brain cell is slowly burning out
Halloween is soon. Wonder if there would be any new chapters.
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You know, the author's note answers that question ;)
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I'm sure there is someone that can make an accurate guess as to what I'm alluding to in the story (C'mon, Zapper, don't disappoint me! I'm sure your profile pic is the deciding clue ;D ). Although, if you guys want me to, I could just tell you in what way Summer's Earth is different (it's a mix of our Earth and two partial crossovers) because that little revelation will get solved kinda late in the story (chapter 19, which I still haven't finished ._.).
Besides the unsolved mystery of the partial crossovers, the next chapter will give a bit more information about just who instigated the war and what they did to be considered the absolute worst monsters imaginable. And, I suppose, the hint to the other partial crossover. People that read the comics might even recognize the stallion(s).
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If its a manga/anime, there’s no chance I’ll have read it
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Ah, well, I don't actively watch anime, either. You don't have to worry about not having watched it, I keep everything in my story completely 'Don't need to have watched it/played it/read it/whatever'. Might spoiler the source material heavily, though. That's something to keep in mind, I suppose. ;)
So they all know each other in a past life. This will pose some BIG writing opportunity for character development. What will happen in the next chapters? ( I did get some hints from the author of what the tone is gonna be like but I'm not sure if they want it leaked). Two guesses I personally made is Summer and Luna reconciling ( that's obvious but I'm just guessing it happens next chapter not later chapters). Luna might somehow agree to the whole herd idea (especially with the prospects of dicking Summer). Guess number two it's a Halloween interlude of a hallows celebration before nightmare night was even a thing.
Another thing we know is that Magic with a capital M 'killed' them (air quotes for unclear method). Why did Magic do that? Why did they have to take humans from another dimension. This is just my ideas and I'm unsure if it.
1.They needed Humans because humans are the ones capable of making any real changes to the system currently in place (for what reason I don't know). From my perspective humans have more capacity for chaos than harmony but I get they're needed. Introducing a foreign element into an already existing equilibrium will shift it in a direction positive of negative its still a change ( huh didn't expect to relate my chemistry knowledge into this).
2.Rudolph and gang were chosen because they were the most convenient choice at the moment. What Magic meant by that is up for grabs. My theory is that Rudolph's world was conveniently close to Equestria at the time and Rudolph fulfills some sort of requirement to be chosen.
This is an easy conjecture to make but I'm 100% sure that Cadance and Twilight are gonna be Rudolph's daughters but I'm not sure how to relate them not being an alicorns by birth. Maybe they gain their memories when ascending since they are able to tap into an alicorns power source. Or if they were born with it its gonna get awkward with various interactions between them.
Rudolph's world is canonically different than ours with hints that it is in some part a crossover ( might be a game) but I seriously don't know what world (sorry for being a casual gamer guys). Guesses can be made that either the world had significantly advanced tech ( due to a Great War that most probably killed more than WWII) or less advanced (with a lack of Cold War) again sorry for being a casual.
Also we know that the three of them is gonna embody the elements(no surprise there) but how they're gonna use it intrigues me. Its is unknown whether Summer leaves at the thousand year mark (when nightmare moon is banished) or before that (Grogar, Tirek, and discord) so there is a probability that Summer may not be present for those events and Celestia and Luna are gonna have to find ways to embody Summer's elements
This is as far as I'm gonna make it since I'm still totally in the dark with the 1000 year timeskip. I'm gonna need more info on their interactions before making any proper guesses.
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Halloween. That's the biggest hint. Although, it doesn't have anything to do with the event. ;)
Summer & Co. have a certain viewpoint on what harmony exactly is and let's just say what Magic intended to get and what it got are two entirely different things. The other thing is probably as close as it gets.
Eh, people have predicted that since chapter one, so I'm pretty sure that must be true. Couldn't possibly be something else and this is in no way meant to confuse you guys. In no way would I be so obvious to make this so blatantly obvious that it is obvious, right? So yeah, Rose and Tabetha are going to be in Equestria when the time comes around. Cadance's backstory kinda stays the same from what is established in Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell (I haven't read it, so there might be slight differences in the end). I'm still iffy about what to do with Twilight but I have an idea already.
Not a game. Dunno, maybe Summer and Rose might be hint enough as to which American anime I'm referencing here. I really want to just say it, but that would make it too easy. The other crossover will get hinted at in the next chapter, so make careful observations, maybe you will guess from which TV show from 2008 he is. I hear the FBI had a few troubles with bald observers in it...
Hmm... Or there were some really bad people that did really bad things that were so bad that they caused really bad things. They were really bad.
You guys are too fixated on Summer. Also, no Grogar. Kinda forgot that he was a thing, but to be honest, I thought he was a thing before the whole windigo debacle. Might have to look into that again, in case I'm mixing things up >.>
I look forward to what you will think might happen during that gap after the next chapter is out. It's gonna be a doozy. Might cause Pinkie to shake all over the place (no, Pinkie isn't in it...).
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Does this American Anime happen to have anything to do with fairytales?
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I'm pretty sure it also has wizards in towers. ;)
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What about ice queens and ice creams?
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I'm pretty sure the ice cream has three flavors and the Ice Queen doesn't like it. Something about some strange series of robberies...
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Led by a smooth criminal and stopped by a little red reaper
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Why, yes. One might say that the little reaper shares a few similarities with little red riding hood and knows how to deal with the big bad wolf all on her own.
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And also has a mother that happens to be related to your little hint
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I don't know... Surely all these hints point in an entirely different direction, right? After all, that Rose has sadly wilted... but maybe... just maybe... there is an alternate world in which a similar person received a new life? A world that seemingly appears like our own but is significantly different in a few ways? ;)
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One does have to wonder... if an alternate version of a person that had specialized in getting rid of nasty pests didn't have to worry about said pests... how would they have turned out? Would she... or he... have been different in any way? And, considering that this world doesn't only have influences of a certain world with quirky girls hunting certain pests, what else could there be that has influenced this world? Maybe the next chapter will give a more detailed description of a certain fellow that somehow found his way to Equestria? ;)
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Ah ah ah, you seem to forget, while the rose wilting has certainly been implied, it has never been confirmed
Well...
Damn...
That's a thing.
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Oh, she definitely will now. :)
Simply GLORIOUS
MAGNIFICENT CHAPTER
Your quite the genius writing this.
Two hot twins and one sister giving one the chills...
Neat