Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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Whoa, that was intense.
Creo que es el capítulo más caliente que as escrito
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Thank you, dear. I'm glad that it was to your liking. Can't promise every naughty scene is going to be on that level, though. I'll do my best when I decide to put in some sexy time, but for the next few chapters, it will be more focused on advancing the story development. ;)
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In comparison with the previous chapters, it was 'darker than usual'. *shrug*
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Espero con ansías los sigui3nte capitulo 😁😘
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I never thought you guys would find it this funny. At least, not to this degree. I just wanted to put in some sort of rational explanation why she feels another set of appendages on her back (and the, you know, lack of them on her arms). >.>
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I'm sorry... it had to be done. *sobs*
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Sorry, making punny puns isn't my strength. No puns for Celestia. They would be atrociously punny. As in, not punny at all. Where would the pun be in that? ;)
So they go nova when they die, huh...
...I'm gonna have to relocate my lab again, huh?
Them Damnit.
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Sorry. Occupational hazards, I suppose. Maybe you could get insurance for that? ;)
10563158
That would require paperwork.
So no.
Pretty sure 99% of my lab is illegal anyway.
But I love when interns ask where I got that picture of the princesses participating in a threeway horizontal tango.
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Oh, you're just Feynning inability to pun. It's all about that wordplay. It's a skill ya pick up whether you love it or hate it. :3
Right...?
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Kek. It was a reference though, right?
Do you know about Llamas in hats? Pretty funny, but very sad nearing the end.
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I really am not that good with puns. The few I actually wrote were mostly unintentional if they happened. I actually don't hate them. *shrug*
And, uh... no. I wasn't even aware that there is a reference that could be made for that. I just wrote it because it sounded logical in my mind.
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Eh. Wordplay isn't actually all that easy. Some of us(me) have an easier time of working with it though. :P
Llamas with hats is a must watch then. The first couple episodes at least. It's a short animated series on Youtube.
Accidental references. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
This fic is really rather underrated. The quality is astonishing, pacing fantastic, time skips natural, chapters satisfying, the lovemaking and smut don't feel unnatural or artificial, and the inner monologue doesn't feel grating unlike nearly every other fic that spends a long time in the main character's head. I've already recommended this to a few friends, too.
It's a fantastic read, pleasantly saucy, and I look forward to more.
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Wow, thank you very much, dear! That's some extraordinary praise you gave me there. Despite me feeling like I don't deserve to be praised that much (there are far better authors out there, even here on fimfiction), I'm grateful nonetheless. As well as recommending it to more people. That's probably going to help more than upvotes ever could. I'm happy I got a hundred upvotes, much less the almost four-hundred now. I never expected to get that much.
So, thanks to all the people that gave this story a chance and for the kind reviews. As well as the multitude of comments speculating what is going to happen further down the line for the story. Always enjoy reading that! :)
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The existence of more accomplished authors, or other well-written stories does not invalidate or diminish the accomplishment and quality of your own. You are doing well and that is worthy of praise, even if others may subjectively or even objectively be doing better, because there's no quota or limit on beautiful stories or interesting ideas.
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Though I do skip them when I realize one is coming up, I have to agree they flow smoothly. Smoothly enough for me to not notice them until....certain things are described.... >>
Man....
The feels in this one....
Just...feels...
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Huh. I thought you skipped through the steamy bits. Have I... have I finally corrupted you? :D
Woh, dis a good story, just finished reading up to here and I have to say I'll be looking forward to the next update.
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I skim over them. Sometimes they have pertinent information.
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Ikr? It's pretty awesome, aside from my own personal preference to skim past the steam. :P
10571916
Fair enough, and while this steam isn't quite my cup of tea it is well written. ^_^
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Thanks for the kind words, both of you. The steamy bits in the next few chapters won't be as heavy as it was in chapter 10, but I'm glad you don't think that it was that bad. The next chapter will have the first proper crossover, so look forward to that this Sunday. :3
Might want to plan in some free time for that, though. That chapter is a bit... long. *whistles innocently*
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That we can both agree on! xP
Hey sorry I was late. Let's get right on to the commentaries.
I see that Summer and Tia has opened new doors to their love lives. Will we see more of this especially since a safeword was set ( set your safewords kids, things get out of hands real fast).
There's also the issue with more shards of the darkness left. Is Discord one of them or big D gonna be a human they knew. What about Tirek, he had a brother who turned good. How will his part be resolved?
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I totally agree with this. This fic is one of the best that I've seen floating around. The pacing is just excellent and the characters are relatable on multiple levels. From submissive Summer to crazy scientist Starswirl. The characters while not particularly fresh ideas *cough* pervert Tia *cough* has really great development which is really all I could hope for
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How dare you! I thought you forgot me :( *cries quietly to herself*
Nah, everything's fine. You're not obligated to comment, after all. But it is always nice to see comments from you and the other 'regulars' :D
Don't you mean 'Summer and Lulu'? ;D
Looks at the next chapter... *coughs loudly, trying to clear her throat* ...damn. Uh... oopsie?
Aww, thank you! :3
You're gonna hate me for the backstory of Tia in the next chapter. Heck, I hate myself for doing that to poor Tia. I have half a mind to rewrite it to make it less... cruel, I suppose. But I think it fits pretty much as a perfect explanation why she is such a massive perverted nymphomaniac. Even though it really is excessively cruel and I really hate it and damnit. I am pretty sure I will get angry comments for that in the next chapter. >.>
Yea I had to catch up with studies
Ooh next chapters gonna have Starswirl. Don't deny me that cryptic old coot.
Don't worry too much with Tia's backstory. Personally I'm too jaded to be angry but I understand that some people may have reservations. To them I say that you keep writing what you want and don't compromise for the readers. Some people like the story to be harsh and I say it's good character building(if it actually explains her backstory)
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Well, I think it explains it in that sort-of 'It could have actually happened to someone' way. If people could actually call for a man-hunt for fictional characters, I would be first in line for this one. Every time I read through it, I get mad at it. Partially because it was me that wrote that and partially because I want to do things. Righteous, but vengeful, things. I'm pretty much a stickler for giving people second chances (probably more than second chances, perhaps I am too naïve to hope for the best in people), but if I were to come across one of those people that actually do such depraved things? I dunno if I could look past something like that.
How about 'pneumonoultramicroscopicsilicovolcanoconiosis'? The fun shall be doubled! Even I can't pronounce it without like 10 minutes of warmup.
Very deep and quite painfull chapter. Quite the wild mix of emotions to find here damn fine lore and overall story.
Wasn't sure about how I felt about this chapter
Heat season is a extream difficult time. Imagen it:
- Summer, Celestia, Luna are in Estrius locked away and Sombra returns and run on a murder streak in the time they are locked away.
- Tirek sucksout entire Citys while the Rulers are indisposed.
- How about Starlight Glimmer Zapping for days uncontested Village or City population that are forced away from their Talent and possible Destiny in live.
If a war break out and a war was prepared for many years by a enemy. They be uncontested when they slaughter there way to success.
A good equiped and very disciplined army and security forces would counter that.