Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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So what is this story crossed over with?
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Oh No.
Also, shit luck there with Luna's birth, Raiders running around looking for a house to pillage and you need to stay hidden from them? Nope, it's baby birthing time! Scream your lungs out in desperate pain that alerts everypony in a 5mi radius to the fact you have a well stocked house and are in a state of terrible weakness! A perfect oppertunity for any aspiring raider to profit from!
Great story thou, glad it updated.
Good Luck!
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I have many more chapters to come, currently the story is at 250k words, still need to go over it for a few edits here and there, add stuff etc.
loving the story so far looking forward to more chapter
A pretty good world-building story. Looking forward for more.
Gender spell?
To who?
Is summer gonna become stallion?
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Uh... no? Not Summer and not in that sense.
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Your hiding message got me confused...
Hint hint here
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I'm not giving any hints regarding what happens in the story, so you don't need to fish for information ;)
A title with a double meaning...
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I don't get it... double meaning? In what way?
Will molestia attack again? Discover in the next chapter of Twin Suns.
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i think they mean that a pony's cutie mark appers on both sides of their flank soo...
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I mean that the death of a loved one is typically described as cold
I know right
dis gettin gud. i wanna see more. hopefully, the next update will be soon.
So, it's morning and i'm a little confused but do they baby her Because she was Sick and its just a hold over or because she lost her leg or was made Lame ?
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Why do you think she lost her leg? o.O If such a thing happened, I would have written that. They 'baby' her because she is sick...
If your version of Equestria has two suns, then that makes it a binary star system where both stars will orbit a central axis, as opposed to our heliocentric solar system.
In a binary star system, the planets can orbit the same central axis, or get caught in the gravity of one or the other. By no means am I an astrologist, I'm just guessing.
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The nice thing about Equestria's solar system is that it is totally screwed up, though. While that binary solar system interests me very much (might look into that sometime...), I'll just keep to the established canon of the celestial bodies needing to be moved manually. ;)
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Because i was half asleep. Thank you for setting it straight. Love the story so far.
Amazing story thus far. I was so immersed I read through both chapters really fast.
Plz continue
I hate you!
This is worse than season one of GoT
Please more!
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Technically you gave plausible explanation of Summer's disbelief. It really seems improbable of them moving together always in the same way never changing position towards each other. Theoretically it might be possible in a binary star system, but probability of such occurrence looks rather low (I'm not astrophysicist, though) since planet must orbit them in the same plane as they orbiting each other and at a speed high enough to stay in the exact same spot relatively to them and at a distance neither too far nor too close where it can support life.
Of course system in which someone moves them manually around the planet can operate in any way no matter how impossible it may seem. I wouldn't be overly surprised if they living on a disc instead of a proper planet either.
Italics
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I wonder where those came from... :D
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Your avatar picture is adorable, I feel a little hollow knowing that cuteness isn't in my life.
Fun fact there is a type of solar system called a binary system that has 2 stars (they go up to 7)
I am sad now... ;-;
Luna is a thing
Bloody Hell... Losing ones familie to criminals.
Damn Timberwolfs... I literally could hold my tears back when they get hurt by em...
Tickle goddess Brilliant
O crap... Heat will beat there meat. To young are they for seed to cool the need...
Sooo Summer, Celestia & Luna are natural born Alicorns. To bad there Dad was killed. That one hell of a Stud to make Alicorns on every successful breeding.
Fantastic chapter
Poor familie... I wonder if there in the nation that will fall to eternal winter... The Crystal Empire would be a thing at the time if im not mistaken.
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He is, isn't he?
The feels ;.;
A neat little story. Only thing I think that could have been improved upon was the Timberwolf situation. Before that it would have been good if a connection was build between Luna and Summer. It felt a bit jarring for them to care that deeply for each other with no paragraph showing scenes of that connection prior. Sure, it makes sense, but without any build up to it, it felt strange to read. Other than that, loved this chapter, even with how sad it was.
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Just a question, do you have a sibling? If not, then sure, that might seem a bit strange, but four years of bonding (especially with Summer acting like a surrogate parent while her mother was lost in her grief) could do a lot.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I don't know whether I want to edit that or not. To me, the scene doesn't feel quite as jarring as you portray it as. I don't wanna know what you think about what I consider to be jarring.
Dont read unless you read trough!
Did they have em 1000 years later? Or did the Discord event make em lose them?
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In my mind, they never stopped wearing them. :3
I love the story so far, but hate how it is written.
Most of the story is just pure narration, which pretty much takes all feelings out when you skip over with 'this happened'.
I hate how there are no line breaks to split apart scenes, making all time jumps pretty sudden.
I know this story is pretty old and this is only the second chapter but what if this celestial is this "Catherine"
Reminds me of that copypasta from a while back.
“I can kill you in over 700 ways with just my bare hands.”
Nocturnis!!!
The solution to winter? Eternal mare heat to increase global levels of warm air
The timber wolf fight makes no sense. They can fly. Why are they grounded?
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You have no sense for storytelling, I can tell. If I were in a forest with wings, I'd rather stay grounded that risk getting knocked into trees, whether because I was panicking due to wolves bigger than me or because there were just too many to reliably dodge all of them while not crashing at the same time.