Thanks for giving Ponid-21 a fave!

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No problem i'm interested to see where it's going. It's not very i'm not sure how to put this but i often feel like Pokemon fanfictions Focus too much on the battle aspect and the power fantasy of sending a kid out there on their own. Yours is more grounded and actually taking into account Sunset and Sci Twi's Characters and weirdness to the world. If i had any complaints its that Sci sometimes seems a little too Accepting of what is happening around her. She tends to be just as meltdown and frantic moment prone as Alicorn Twi. Sunset is on point though. Not her first time in hooves. The Pikachu is great but i kind of feel like the Elaine could challenge and question the pair more given the suddenness of the situation and oddness of Shimmy as a Pokemon.
But like i Said its a good story and you definitely hooked my interest. I just wish it was going a little slower is all. Really digging more into the characters. But its easily forgiven how short the story is right now it needs time to develop after all .... Uh i just realized i turned this into a ramble . But yes ! Good Story Worth the Follow !

Thanks for the favourite on Pokémon Red and Purple!

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Well i mean if you ever want to share experiences to have more than one story to pull from for writing , Or if you just feel like you need to talk throw me a PM on here . I don't mind trying to share it can be a healthy thing to drag up memories in small doses .

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If you go to my profile, on the right side of it, you'll find a link to the original creator of the Equinox Ponies and their universe

I understand how you feel, I was able to write Scoot's emotions rather intricately due to having been in such situations myself. Never quite to the degree where I'm having her currently, but enough to emulate those feelings.