Suddenly dying sometimes leads to you questioning a lot of things. I am Summer Sol, twin sister of Celestia Sol, and this is my journey. If only I could go through it with my beloved... but maybe I will find her again? Perhaps I never lost her?
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Someone picked up that phone, cause I Called it! So question did they atleast see the FiM cartoon enough to know the elements will find their bearers? Hope Summer atleast gives Sunset a mother
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Nah, no MLP:FiM for Summer and Lulu. Sorry. :3
This Platinum is well-verse in dream magic surprised me the most. I never heard she was any good in magic since she already had Clover as her advisor.
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She isn't. Most of what she is doing is due to the help of the corrupted dream creatures creating those nightmares for her. *shrug*
Awesome chapter
And so the thousand year wait begins. The two of them are going to pick up some students during the thousand year wait are they. Can't wait to see who those students be.
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so, time skip next? I want Summer be Sunset's adopted mother.. more or less no one knows her home life or family in canon anyway
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I'm not going to spoiler anything in regards to Sunset, dear. You'll just have to wait and see. :P
Although, I'll give a hint as to the next chapter: Which of the Fiendship of Magic comics have I not covered so far? :3
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well you covered Discord, Tirek and Sombra but skipped the Dazzlings cause they're Starswirl's problem. Next should be Sunset or the sirens?
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Since when does Sunset have a Fiendship is Magic comic? :P
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oh wait nvm.. you meant Queen Chrysalis? Also i'm dumb, i did remember Sunset had her origins discussed in an IDW comic, not about her parentage or just her rising ambition and escape through the mirror.
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Correct. ;)
i forgot if at the end of the Nightmare Rarity Arc if the creatures on the moon got uncorrupted or not, I honestly feel really bad over what happened to them. they were so cute, now they remind me of the Umbra
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They did get 'cleansed' at the end of the Nightmare Rarity-arc and their corrupted forms really do seem eerily like the umbra, don't they? Those things are creepy as hell. Absolute nightmare-fuel. o_o
Brilliant chapter. I expected Celestia or Summer to be it. Luna was to obvies.
Love to see Platinums soul getting devoured.
Also wipe her from the history books. She dont deserv to be remembered. Just change the name in hearts warming
Funny... there is a saying that attempts to preventing future events cause them. Perhaps this knownlage of the prophecy was the problem. Knownlage of it brings no benefit. Literally the opposent.
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Well, we all knew this was going to happen one way or another. I'm happy at least one person predicted this exact outcome. While I did try to keep this "twist" as secret as I could, I do like to see it when people guess things correctly in regards to the story. :3
As for causing the prophecy to happen by trying to avoid it... you guys have no idea that there is way more to this than meets the eye. *rubs her hands mischievously in glee*
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Wonder if Cadance will be a daughter of one of the Siblings
Huh... If she even will come to pass...
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I dont get it
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Especially with Luna as literally the most experienced and proficent in it. Guess using Nyx she can boost it.
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Pale imitations of Lunas talent
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Yep
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Did they ever complet the homework Starswirl give em? A Thousand years... Good time to develop automobils and planes. After all... Spacetech is what Equus needs to flee the reach of the Suns in a few billian years
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I hope no more than 200 years per chapter. Some major events now and again.
Also the better tech up! Would want aliens to visit one day and laugh at imortal being that never used there 'time' to progress things.
Especially since space tech could be used to Terra or in this case Equus-Form another planet.
Who knows? Maybe they find Magical fluffy Unicorn aliens dancing on rainbows
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I really have to find em and read em.
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Sirens normaly get sent away to Starswirl being biast towards no Pony kind... But that would fit here
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Chrysalis is best Bugwaifu. She would make a awesome lover
Also Changelings as spy support to keep everyone in peace? I always had the head canon that they secretly police every race since war decreases harvestings.
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Wait... Are the Umbra not physical Wendigos?
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Awww... I think if you cuddle em long enough they become very deer to you...
Speaking of Deer... How are they doing? And Zebras! They are masters of Alchemy!
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They didn't watch the show. At the time they were killed by Magic, it didn't even exist.
Ah... Starswirl is so going to be disappointed in them once he returns. xD
There is going to be a 'almost-a-thousand-years' time skip. Sorry to disappoint, but I'm already getting impatient to get to the Episode 1 territory of the show and I still have a lot of stuff I want to write before that with Summer's daugh... uh, 'students' before Tia's return. I'm currently on Chapter 25 and I'm thinking of doing Tia's return in Chapter 27 or so. Depends on how Ch26 turns out, I have a few ideas for that one. >.>
*whistles inconspicuously, trying not to sweat nervously* Ah-hah-hah... yeah... that... *coughs embarrassedly*
* Activates lightning claws with a sinister SHINNNG*
Death will not save you from the wrath of two sisters, Platinum...
Or mine....
Waaaaaaiiit a second. Stop right there a moment. Do I detect the birth first
nirikkirin here, by chance?That would mean Platinum and somedragon got rather closer than just friendship. Turns out she did mellow a bit during the Time of Chaos, after all.
Of course not. But admit it, that would be funny!
actually i think i can see where this is going. Summer's grief and new 'no mercy' attitude is what made Chrysalis into a tyrant queen when she tried eradicating the changelings the first time. In Chrysalis' mind that means there would be no peace so she decide to plot revenge and show them the same mercy they gave her children.. 'none'
If it turns out to be a 'test' that the Tree of Harmony coughed up to try and test the sisters' mettle, I will personally put an axe trough it.
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Discord season 9 was enough, I hope it isn't the elements fault.
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I don't even... Well, the idea is interesting, I'll give you that much. If it weren't for Platinum's age at that point, it might have been a viable conclusion, too. Dunno how Summer would have reacted to the birth of a new race due to her most hated enemy, though. >.>
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I mean, chaos magic can explain a lot. But it was just a silly thought.
...wait, does exposure to chaos magic cause rhyme? That would explain why Everfree-dwelling Zecora does it all the time...
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Huh, now that's a theory worth investigating. I doubt I would find any answers, though. The Journal of the Two Sisters isn't specific about that and so far, I haven't read anything about that in the comics. Still need to read the rest of them. >.>
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Testing magical artifacts. Can't wait to break 'em, can't save the world without them.
[Spoilers are here.]
I'm kinda surprised you went in this direction, if you would have gone with Summer being corrupted you would have had the perfect setup for a time skip, that is where I thought you were going, if luna was still corrupted and summer sacrificed herself and they both got banished, you could have kept the story direction pretty parallel with the canon universe.
I did not expect this, who knows how the timeline will go with Celestia being the one gone for 1,000 years
I really do wonder why Celestia did it. my theory is Celestia Saw Summer being Corrupted by Princess bitchface. and changed it by going to Platnum before Platnum could go searching for Summer(Most likely to be her target due to being seen as the weakest and easiest of the three to capture due to her soft and forgiving nature). Celestia kept her loyalty by taking the fall for summer. and by extent Breaking her loyalty. my thought of why it was summer instead of luna, was simply because in the original timeline with there not being a summer sol. it was luna who was corrupted and Celestia did not run off and take the fall
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This exact moment is why I started writing Twin Suns in the first place, I couldn't get the idea out of my head after I saw one of Yakovlev-Vad's pieces of Celestia with red hair and thought 'Huh, wouldn't it be neat if Tia had a twin?'. Inspiration struck and I took out my iPad and drew a cover art for a story that quickly spiraled out of control in massive proportions. Quite frankly, I'm still surprised that it got way more likes/views than I ever expected.
Trust me, I have a time skip that's probably better than 'Oh hey, moon!'. ;)
Celestia's visions aren't always "true" to reality. Most often, she sees events play out in similar ways to what would eventually happen (at least, that's my interpretation of it). If you had a dream where you, for some reason, fought someone, what would you think? Celestia doesn't know she was possessed during the fight in her vision, so she comes to the conclusion that something must have happened to change her relationship with Summer and Luna so much that she would use lethal force. Thus the panicked retreat after waking up because she did not want to let her vision come true.
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Could have worded that a bit kinder. "Blob of meat sack", really? I suppose every kind person out there is "stupid", then. Why do I even bother anymore? ._.
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forget him, i for one like the story so far it. But i do think Summer can't seem have a middle ground where she can put her hoof down without going extreme. From what i can read she's going to stop being kind or merciful which would also bite her in the butt later. Please don't cancel just cause of jerks
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I'm not going to cancel because one person is blowing things out of proportion, dear. I understood the outrage about Platinum quite clearly, even though I hate the fact some people are quick to bring out the pitchforks and whatnot. I'm more miffed about it apparently being a bad thing that Summer trusts Starswirl "baselessly" and is willing to help ponies that "clearly" are out for her family's lives.
It just... kinda hurts to see people disregard kindness as stupid. I am a "stupid naïve kind" person myself, giving people chances upon chances if they are willing to be better than they were. That is something Summer 'inherited' from me, and yes, Summer is stupid a lot of times but not because she wants to show kindness of all things. I am aware a lot of people talk behind my back because of who I am, but I still like to give those people a chance as naïve as that sounds. I do draw lines, even though I feel bad every time when I get disappointed by people and whatnot. Especially if those people abuse my trust and those multiple chances I grant them. I don't like it when they betray me like that and blame it on my family or best friend for something that is their own fault, unable to learn the lesson so to speak.
Aside from that, you are kinda right with Summer ceasing to be so merciful due to what happened in the latest chapter. I had hinted in the comments before that there would be something that would 'break' her and that was what happened in Chapter 15. It doesn't mean she will go and become completely heartless, but she will definitely struggle with showing her bleeding heart for quite a while. Even more so if her remaining family is being threatened.
I thank you for being so supportive, I really do appreciate it. Don't worry, there is a lot more to come for Twin Suns, and, quite possibly, a side story at some point. We will see.
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You think I give a damn about what Summer decided to do? She could give all those ponies a big hug and tell them she forgave them for all I care, that's her choice.
Point is, I don't understand some of the people who would forgive the un-repenting murderers of their loved ones and friends, but I respect their choice nonetheless. No, you've completely missed the point.
Allow me to repeat my previous comment, because apparently, you need some remedial lessons in reading comprehension.
My issue here isn't her bleeding heart, but her utter lack of action when her family got shit on - just empty platitudes after empty platitudes for them.
What kind of monster willingly puts their family in the path of danger? What sort of selfish individual cares and follows only their own desires, ignoring the suffering they're obviously putting upon others by going down that path? You know, for a pony that parroted on and on about "Kindness, Generosity, all that stuff", she certainly didn't give her family a lot of that where it really counted.
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Apparently, I have.
Oh, wait... Starswirl is one of those murderers, right? Huh. Apparently... all of them are. Celestia and Luna are condemning the whole of ponykind while Summer isn't. She must be in the wrong here, arguing against her family to stop being unfair to an old stallion that is looking for help, for a solution to help ponykind move away from the little spat between tribes.
And I totally misunderstood you here as well, it seems. Showing kindness is stupid, after all. Every time she is trying to be understanding of the ponies seeking out her help, she is just giving empty platitudes to her sisters. I suppose they should have stayed in their little home forever, then, shutting themselves away from every other pony out there.
You are probably going to retort to this and say something along the lines of Summer being a monster for being willing to look past their differences, that she doesn't give a damn about the opinion of her sisters and whatnot... You have already decided that this story is a lost cause, haven't you? That's okay. I don't care, go read other stories that are actually good in your opinion because I never claimed that this story was quality fanfiction. You have already downvoted this story if I am correct about that downvote on Wednesday, so why am I even writing this? Perhaps I'm just salty, then.
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FFS, at this point I'm not sure if it's you or me that's causing the confusion, I'm pretty sure it's me.
So let me rephrase it again, I was referring to the end of chapter 4 and first 1/3 of chapter 5 - Where the entire thing was just frustrating to read.
Not because of how Summer was trying too hard to promote Kindness and Compassion to even including Platinum, but because of how much hurting Celestia and Luna were having during this segment both from the pain of losing their mother and this whole ruler thing, yet Summer decided that it would be a good idea to practically ignore those pains and strong-armed them into this whole thing with a 'Trust me' and 'Don't let Princess Prat-inum get to you'.
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Okay... so typing these words and re-reading the segment again, I may or may not have over-reacted...
It wasn't quite as bad as I first thought, but there's just something about that segment that really just rubbed me the wrong way.
I've chilled out a bit now, Yikes, I really should have worded that a bit kinder. I'm not calling Summer stupid for wanting to forgive and tackle the problem that caused the loss of their mother, I'm calling Summer stupid for somewhat forcing Celestia and Luna into this mess.
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Sorry for being a bit too harsh at the start there... I went off like a nuke.
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It's okay. I should also apologize about getting snarky (or whatever one wants to call my attitude there >.>), I shouldn't have gotten so defensive over a fictional situation like that. I have been told far too many times that I'm too optimistic, kind, and honest by various people that it irks me that the world works like that. My brother always shakes his head at me, but I can't help it. I have always been the voice of reason to my brother when he was being unreasonable with his friends, fighting over stupid things. *shrug*
It's just... Hmm... Let me give you an example that probably doesn't do this situation any justice, but kinda explains my thought process behind this: Two drivers get into an accident purely by coincidence and one of them dies while the other does not. Now, the deceased party had a brother/child/whatever that accuses the survivor of being a murderer even though neither of the drivers was at fault for the accident. In Summer's view, Platinum couldn't have known that forcing her mother through that ritual would cause her death when about, let's say... 98% of those ponies survive. Sure, Celestia and Luna are rightfully mad for her being so indifferent, but in itself, it was unlucky happenstance. Summer would rather move on than lose herself to a grudge (something that is quite hypocritical of her considering what happens later in the story >.>). I guess it is naïve and whatnot, but that doesn't mean it is selfish of her for wanting to help out those ponies genuinely seeking out the help of her and her sisters while 'disregarding' their feelings about the death of their mother. It helps no one to blame those that didn't have a part in it and that's something Summer wanted to hammer into the heads of her sisters by "parroting" to them that they shouldn't condemn the whole of ponykind.
Let's leave this argument behind us before either of us get a headache from it, shall we? I admit, I'm not the best writer and probably did this whole situation injustice by being unable to properly write it, but this is just a hobby of mine that I put way too much time into. This all started with a simple picture I saw on Deviantart and spiraled out of control with me trying to screw up every possible canon piece of material there is (The Journal, comics, the what-have-you). I can't do everything right and I don't want to. Otherwise, I would be writing something actually good that deserves 400+ likes.
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I don't think that the 'two drivers' analogy fits this situation, but at this point I agree that we should just leave this headache-inducing argument behind.
I admit I held off on reading this one for awhile (aka until now) one of those "you know shits about to hit the fan so you need to prepare your heart for it" deals. I'm glad i finally read it, it hurt the heart but that's angst for you. I knew Platinum was behind the dark artifacts and shite and she was going to be a big problem later, but I sure as hell didn't expect a Possession scenario like that. Bravo
It was just established that what they now is unavoidable there for noone is to blame for the Moon thing
Only half destroyed. I can many groups that would take it! Cultists, Military organisations, raiders, etc etc.
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Don't forget the changelings. :P
I was imagining Platinum using the foalnapped ponies to try to become an alicorn, only to become a changeling instead.
That was so f***ing intense! and sad. so sad.
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It was. Wasn't easy to write, either. >.>
oh my god...
I don't think i've ever been as mad at anything as i am towards platinum right now