Very nice. Definitely gave me a smile, especially in those difficult times.

Great job!

Also, if you don't mind, reminds me a bit of my owb works

Very sweet and sexy. When you love someone they always look good.

This was a very well made story. The only thing worth criticizing is a few spelling or grammatical errors here and there. Otherwise, it was a very enjoyable read.

*<>* 10/10 great job

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thanks for the comment, i try to do my best with my spelling and grammer. i know i should have an editor for it, but i like to do it myself, so i can improve my writing.

“No.” Derpy said as she held her human close. “I messed up again, and he yelled at me, told me I was doing a horrible job.” the mare said as tears were no flowing freely.

the second I think it should be now